Review Detail of Valvrave in My MCV and Doomsday
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Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^ P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p
My MCV and Doomsday
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WhiteDragon32:Keep up the good work! Thanks. I don't know what some of these people are having issues with in this LN because I only want more chapters lol.
WhiteDragon32:Keep up the good work! Thanks. I don't know what some of these people are having issues with in this LN because I only want more chapters lol.
@Valvrave When did the minibus became six-wheeled? Why does the MC not using the Absorb Ability it use to have with his minibus when he kills the paranormals. He looted the pufferfish monster but he didn't loot the blood nucleus from the mutant zombie he first killed before he killed the pufferfish, why is that, is he forgetful? Some parts of the story seems to be missing. There are alao lot of wrong grammars, u should recheck
Is it truly harem? If so I probably won’t read it since I found that I wasn’t fond of harem novels. If it is harem someone please tell me so I won’t be disappointed. If I like the plot then I will read it but I found that harems make the plot unusual. I mean in my mind the harem just ruins the story, but that’s just my opinion. However, I don’t know why I have that feeling and thought I just don’t like how the story progresses after a harem is created.