Review Detail of ThreeJaoXia in My MCV and Doomsday
Review detail
First let me say that I'm a big fan of stories that involve the apocalypse, zombies, rv's or mechanically interesting vehicles and roadtrips. And I think if you too are interested in any of that then DON'T READ THIS. Even after I convinced myself to mentally treat this story as Steampunk (meaning any technology can work like magic and that's ok) I still was annoyed at how ridiculous pretty much everything was. And by everything I don't just mean the physical things (still can't figure out if the van is bigger inside like a Tardis) - but character interactions / development / world building / dialog / consistency - everything. Out of the 25 or so things I've added to my library here this is the first to be removed.
My MCV and Doomsday
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For fun tech building and the apocalypse try I Have a Mansion in the Post Apocalypse World. For zombies maybe Apocalypse Meltdown - or maybe God and Devil World if you can ignore the massive racism / nationalism.
DoomBringerStr:Can you give me a recommendation novel like this genre?
Oh you said novel not webnovel.. hmm - my favorite zombie novels are John Ringo's Blacktide rising books, but there's no super tech in it. Will think on if there's something like this wn but don't think so. Part of why I was so disappointed with how they ruined a good idea.
DoomBringerStr:Can you give me a recommendation novel like this genre?
I remember starting a novel series with zombies and aliens - if that sounds interesting maybe I can find it again.
DoomBringerStr:Can you give me a recommendation novel like this genre?
hmmm. I don't understand what your complaints are about. They story flows smoothly. When things happen in it it makes sense and doesn't seem like a random fart flew out the authors butt and found its way into the story. Where you hoping for more rape? More random killing? More murder everyone and stab everyone in the back even for 1/2 a pound of rice?
You have to keep in mind this is somebody who thinks 'I Have a Mansion in the Post Apocalypse World' is a good novel worth recommending to others and that novel is absolute garbage that made me want to kill myself for having experienced it. So you can safely just take what they say and know that the opposite is probably what reality is.
SorcererCat:hmmm. I don't understand what your complaints are about. They story flows smoothly. When things happen in it it makes sense and doesn't seem like a random fart flew out the authors butt and found its way into the story. Where you hoping for more rape? More random killing? More murder everyone and stab everyone in the back even for 1/2 a pound of rice?
I completely agree with you. I had to say something to make sure that those who read this arn't tricked by him into not reading this LN. I guess this guy just doesn't like LNs that have a proper story to them with a good flow that make sense.
Graboid_42:You have to keep in mind this is somebody who thinks 'I Have a Mansion in the Post Apocalypse World' is a good novel worth recommending to others and that novel is absolute garbage that made me want to kill myself for having experienced it. So you can safely just take what they say and know that the opposite is probably what reality is.
