I love how the story is written. I don't mind grammar anyway because we can edit them. I'm more focused on story development and character development. After I read 5 of the chapters, I can say that this story has high potential. I love how well the mc though is well written. I wish chapters were longer so that I can feel the impact of the character. but anyway this is a good read! I'll add it to my collection.
The story has a great plot and an even better cast of characters. The dialogues in the story are realistic and relatable, compared to many other stories where it seems as if they're borderline robotic. The main character is also genuinely likeable, with her own strengths and flaws which makes her much more relatable. The story is filled with mysteries surrounding the main character, the town and its inhabitants and the reader is left with unanswered questions which works as a charm for the story. I'll definitely be keeping up with the updates for this one!
Well I can't say much when I don't really read much but what I can get from from first and second chapters,that the starting starts with sad background which most of the readers empathize with. Its has good starting and solid storyline with little plot hole background.. All in all its good .. So keep up the good work
I like the way that the author explains everything in the first chapters but it leaves many questions that mean that there is something that the main character must find on her own and that leaves for something to read but that my opinion not everyone thinks that way but aye it happens. Keep going, author. Bring those questions to answers.
Starting with a funeral is always a pretty strong start to me especially as an inciting incident. I'm intrigued by the mystery of the protagonists origin and while I have some idea of what she is I'm interested to read more and see how she reacts to her heritage and family. TLDR it's a pretty good read.
Great and interesting novel, Author! [img=recommend][img=recommend] The novel has an interesting idea/synopsis, and your book cover is lit! 🔥😊👍🏻 I like the MC's personality, and how you write the novel through her point of view. You update a lot of chapters too which is great. 😁 I added it in my library, and I'll definitely read your updates. (: Though, just a few things... The first chapter needs a little editing, because it's a little confusing due to the typos. But, no worries, you can fix it. I've read the other chapters. :) And it's better not to keep everything in one paragraph, create one more. These are just my opinion and suggestions... so you can just ignore them. 😅 Anyway, good luck, and keep writing! [img=recommend][img=recommend] I like the silver idea btw. 😊💕
Good read overall! There are three points I liked about the story. First, Silver is a well established character that her decisions and actions aren't questionable because I got to know where she's coming from. Second, right to the beginning of the story, I already have something to look forward because of mysteries(won't enumerate them though so I won't give away spoilers). Lastly, the complexity of the conflicts created helps me have something to be tensed and thrilled for.