Oracle_Myth
F20, I write dialog-focused stories with unconventional characters. I draw a lot of inspiration from Russian classics writing style with a modern twist.
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I will echo the other reviews in saying you should really add a synopsis, so people can know what they are getting into when starting the book. Otherwise the writing style is pleasant and the story is interesting. I will keep it in my collection and see how it progresses. Good luck and keep writing!
I like that people are rich enough in your world so so many can buy it and enjoy a game!
I applaud the author's strong character voice. Athena's voice is very distinct. I felt the dialogue in some places was a little messy, but it's can be attributed to a charming quirk of the writing style, we are in a teenager's brain after all. the story is fast-paced, but there is a lack of atmospheric descriptions at times that pull me out of the story. in conclusion, I am waiting for the next chapter anxiously!