F20, I write dialog-focused stories with unconventional characters. I draw a lot of inspiration from Russian classics writing style with a modern twist.
I will echo the other reviews in saying you should really add a synopsis, so people can know what they are getting into when starting the book. Otherwise the writing style is pleasant and the story is interesting. I will keep it in my collection and see how it progresses. Good luck and keep writing!
Amazingly captivating writing style! The author certainly knows how to tug on the reader's heartstrings. If you are looking for an emotional read, you will enjoy this.
The writing style is unique and the author knows how to write action scenes for sure. If you are looking for something that is action-packed and flows easily - this is for you.
Love the premise, the writing style is amazing. This can be a great first "video game" novel for people that aren't familiar with the genre!
I like that people are rich enough in your world so so many can buy it and enjoy a game!
A really great and unique story! I normally find it hard to immerse completely into sci-fi, but this one did it for me. it is fast paced and there isn't a moment when nothing is happening. 5/5 would recommend to people who are new to the concept of transmigration, as I was.
This story is a whirlwind for sure! There isn't a boring moment and the writing flows at a steady but neck-breaking speed. That being said I love it as it fits the story well. The premise and the world are a superb!
The premise is very interesting and the character voice is very strong. I love the writing style and being in Silver's head. This book reads a lot like a TV show script.
I applaud the author's strong character voice. Athena's voice is very distinct. I felt the dialogue in some places was a little messy, but it's can be attributed to a charming quirk of the writing style, we are in a teenager's brain after all. the story is fast-paced, but there is a lack of atmospheric descriptions at times that pull me out of the story. in conclusion, I am waiting for the next chapter anxiously!