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VRW1

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an arthor and also an artist and working on getting an amie.

2020-11-23 JoinedGlobal
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  • VRW1
    VRW14d
    Replied to VRW1

    No problem.

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    [BL] Ten Faced Boyfriend
    LGBT+ · Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • VRW1
    VRW15d
    Posted

    I going to make sure that I can do this as short as possible because I not a fan of boy love really but I do like good stories though and it starting off great for the author telling us the situation first and than giving us something to go by on and that is something that is a cause and effect. due to the ability of the mother and he reaction as a person of his own will. keep it author.

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    [BL] Ten Faced Boyfriend
    LGBT+ · Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • VRW1
    VRW15d
    Commented

    he don't know what to do about himself. he is lost in a world that is divide by mindset and something that is just boring.

    He knew someday she will do something that will jeopardize his life but didn't know that the day will come this soon. He is just 18 years old and getting married at such a young age when he can't even talk to people. It's crazy, well when it comes to his mother everything is crazy.
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    [BL] Ten Faced Boyfriend
    LGBT+ · Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • VRW1
    VRW15d
    Commented

    Dang that tuff but that is stuff that mothers do want but that is something that was part of the system I guess that just as a false world.

    He tried to calm himself. This is the first time in his life that he has yelled this much. Only his mother can make him yell this much. She is crazy.
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    [BL] Ten Faced Boyfriend
    LGBT+ · Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • VRW1
    VRW111d
    Posted

    I like the way that the character is reacting to the situation and they all trying to bet for something that will get them into trouble and mess up their lies and it would be good to see people have more high stakes. I just hope that they don't hurt each other by just making a bet but the way they going. It seems that way but I just that to read more to find out. Keep it up, author. It's something good for your first English novel but there are mistakes but very few. So it didn't throw me off.

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    The bet
    Contemporary Romance · Jo_J
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  • VRW1
    VRW111d
    Commented

    0 to 100 real quick.

    Ch 2 A Bet is a bet
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    The bet
    Contemporary Romance · Jo_J
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  • VRW1
    VRW111d
    Commented

    Okay. This story is heated and it remains me of someone that make a dumb decision after realizing that they don't need to be perfect and then regreting it but I read the prologue so let see what happen so far.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    The bet
    Contemporary Romance · Jo_J
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  • VRW1
    VRW115d
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    I like the world building of the story and there are some errors but not too many that make the reader to be confuse but it does got a good building the world up. so keep it up author.

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    Rightful Vengeance
    Fantasy Romance · Samantha_R_Samuel
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  • VRW1
    VRW115d
    Commented

    wither. is that a error or not but if so it change the line. it doesn't fit. that might be me though.

    However, we could use them like bricks that could then be joined together with clay to make our buildings. It was mostly used to build our castle, and we decorate it with the green grasses and flowers nature provides us during spring, but they all wither when autumn and winter comes around. While commoners just used stones and rocks to build theirs and decorate with wildflowers or none at all.
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    Rightful Vengeance
    Fantasy Romance · Samantha_R_Samuel
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  • VRW1
    VRW115d
    Commented

    you human. you mean us human beings. I understand if someone was talking right here.

    Legend foretells that when the earth was still new and life on it had just begun after the Creator of life had finished his work of creation and assigned a god to each creation, the gods went separate ways in twos, threes, fours and fives. They were given divine authority by the Creator to search and claim lands not claimed by the other to rule over with their abilities. They were restricted to the continent of Mu and weren't supposed to interact with other continents since that is where you humans live.
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    Rightful Vengeance
    Fantasy Romance · Samantha_R_Samuel
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  • VRW1
    VRW115d
    Commented

    this line hit so hard.

    Some of us die in the process, others survive and may end up living miserably or a life of satisfaction.
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    Rightful Vengeance
    Fantasy Romance · Samantha_R_Samuel
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  • VRW1
    VRW116d
    Replied to Samantha_R_Samuel

    Okay thank you for the review but please keep reading and you might have a different opinion about the story when you go on and read more about it. So please continue and give me another review.

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    The Dark Sweetest(Nightmare Edition)
    Teen · VRW1
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Replied to modestbaddie

    yeah. human nature.

    She lied on her bed and buried down her griefs in the heart of the pillow.
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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Replied to modestbaddie

    than they go to sleep but I like that flow of words.

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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Replied to modestbaddie

    yeah true but still though he could have just said something different but that my opinion.

    Anyone in her place would have gotten a divorce but she didn't as she loved her husband. Alas! He didn't cause their marriage was an arranged marriage, set up by their families for their company's sake.
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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Posted

    I like the way the story is coming along and it is something that I can like and I have many genre ideas when it come to writing and so keep up the creation.

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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Commented

    huh?

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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Commented

    I think they are highly misunderstand but it is what it is though.

    For even devil's have hearts, they just forget to beat.
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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Commented

    exactly.

    No one is born evil, it's our situation that turns us into one.
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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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  • VRW1
    VRW119d
    Commented

    why blame the child into this even though it the man mistake. just saying.

    She lied on her bed and buried down her griefs in the heart of the pillow.
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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    Historical Romance · modestbaddie
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