an arthor and also an artist and working on getting an amie.
I going to make sure that I can do this as short as possible because I not a fan of boy love really but I do like good stories though and it starting off great for the author telling us the situation first and than giving us something to go by on and that is something that is a cause and effect. due to the ability of the mother and he reaction as a person of his own will. keep it author.
he don't know what to do about himself. he is lost in a world that is divide by mindset and something that is just boring.
Dang that tuff but that is stuff that mothers do want but that is something that was part of the system I guess that just as a false world.
I like the way that the character is reacting to the situation and they all trying to bet for something that will get them into trouble and mess up their lies and it would be good to see people have more high stakes. I just hope that they don't hurt each other by just making a bet but the way they going. It seems that way but I just that to read more to find out. Keep it up, author. It's something good for your first English novel but there are mistakes but very few. So it didn't throw me off.
I like the world building of the story and there are some errors but not too many that make the reader to be confuse but it does got a good building the world up. so keep it up author.
wither. is that a error or not but if so it change the line. it doesn't fit. that might be me though.
you human. you mean us human beings. I understand if someone was talking right here.
this line hit so hard.
Okay thank you for the review but please keep reading and you might have a different opinion about the story when you go on and read more about it. So please continue and give me another review.
yeah. human nature.
than they go to sleep but I like that flow of words.
yeah true but still though he could have just said something different but that my opinion.
I like the way the story is coming along and it is something that I can like and I have many genre ideas when it come to writing and so keep up the creation.
I think they are highly misunderstand but it is what it is though.
why blame the child into this even though it the man mistake. just saying.