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PGOD is a book series for young adults created by Kabir Singh & Judy Goh.

2021-02-23 JoinedSingapore
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial55min
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    The story perfectly captures the world that the author has envisioned, a dark, macabre world riddled with terrifying creatures that come out during the night. The pace of the story is steady and can be followed easily. It has a great element of world background and makes you feel as if the story isn't centered around the actions of the main character and that the world carries on in the background regardless of what the protagonist is up to. The main character is multi-layered and not at all like the one dimensional protagonists you would find in other stories. I'm looking forward to future updates from this story.

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    The Devil and the Huntsman
    Fantasy · MicahDarkFantasy
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  • PGODofficial
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    Replied to Joel_West

    Thanks for your comment! In the Kindle/ebook version of our book, and on platforms where this is supported, thoughts are italicised. Webnovel does not support this formatting function, unfortunately. We'll look into a possible fix for clarity.

    Is this how it was all going to end for me? All the hard work I'd put in to reach this point... Was it in vain? Is there no justice here, only luck? Alex was stronger than me, and he died too. How can I compete in this tournament, when I can't protect anyone? I'm too weak. I've always been. I haven't changed at all. I'm useless. Dying would be so much easier.
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    Playing Games Of Despair (Spirity)
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  • PGODofficial
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    Replied to wookie0_

    Do let us know where the grammatical mistakes are; we will correct them if required.

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    Playing Games Of Despair (Spirity)
    Fantasy · PGODofficial
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial6d
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    The story is just getting started but it is highly promising. While there are many unanswered questions, the story is following through on a group of young main characters with superpowers. We'll just have to see what the title of the book has to do with the story, and how the opening scene is linked to our main protagonists!

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    By the Power of Plot Armor!
    Sci-fi · Joel_West
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial6d
    Commented

    This paragraph is in present tense, while everything before this was in past tense. Pick one, perhaps?

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    By the Power of Plot Armor!
    Sci-fi · Joel_West
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial6d
    Commented

    A nice tidbit dropped here with Julius/name of someone... I wonder what the reference is to?

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    By the Power of Plot Armor!
    Sci-fi · Joel_West
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial6d
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    As an opening, a lot of things are happening quickly. For the reader, this can be confusing. I'd recommend you to break this up into several paragraphs, so that the pace of eye movement follows the scene. You may also want to set up more background before action takes place. We are introduced to a new time, character and experiences all within the span of 1 paragraph!

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    By the Power of Plot Armor!
    Sci-fi · Joel_West
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial6d
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    The story has a fun fantasy-adventure plot. I would love to see more character development and world-building! Please write more about this immersive world. As a fellow writer, I would advise you to check on punctuation so that the flow is easier to follow :)

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    The Dream Saga
    Fantasy · wookie0_
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial6d
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    The story is action-packed and there are a lot of updates. The plot moves quickly with dialogue and travelling time-jumps. Even though the author does not have English as their first language, the story is worth reading for the creativity!

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    The True Purity of Good and Evil
    Fantasy · VRW1
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial6d
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    Fascinating premise... I kept reading! The plot really picks up in Chapter 5. Breta, the lead female character, is the strong, smart and witty heroine that we all aspire to. Rooting for her success!

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    Never Normal
    Fantasy Romance · Proteety_Promi
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  • PGODofficial
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    That man is a scary sight!

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    Never Normal
    Fantasy Romance · Proteety_Promi
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  • PGODofficial
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    Replied to Nullabutton

    Thanks for honest comments and reading through the entire plot. We indeed conceptualised the story as a comic/manga adaptation. From the perspective of a reader, we understand the chapter breaks on your reading behaviour. But please understand that unlike a lot of other writers on Webnovel who write as a hobby (perhaps even you yourself), PGOD is our sole professional project even though we offer it free on this platform. In future, you may wish to consider supporting independent novelists and creators such as us.

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    Playing Games Of Despair (Spirity)
    Fantasy · PGODofficial
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial1mth
    Replied to Rihana_hinds

    Great that I didn't leave a spoiler then! :D

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    Is This First Love?
    Teen · Rihana_hinds
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial1mth
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    This is definitely a good read. The writing style is more laidback and easy to grasp. The dialogs are well thought. I wish there were more chapters I could read but I guess, good things take time.

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    Her Destined Mate
    Fantasy Romance · Moon_Bloom7
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial1mth
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    I really like the set up and the characters feel realistic especially Regina. The author knows how to bring the book to life. Its still in its early stages but I have a feeling it will pick up a lot in the future.

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    Peace offering to the cursed prince
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial1mth
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    The world-building of this medieval plot is very good, and dialogue is impeccable. The command of English is commendable. I am new to the isekai genre, so that part was a bit jarring...

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    The Maiden Of The Roseland Against All Odds
    Fantasy · Nullabutton
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  • PGODofficial
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    Commented

    Exciting ~~~

    Anna quickly flashed a nervous smile and nudged me in the ribs with her elbow. The Comte was watching, curious yet patient. I bit and chewed my lips. Oh, where do I begin? Do I start with my previous life? About the goddesses, the bitches up there? About who Anna really was? Where do I begin?
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    The Maiden Of The Roseland Against All Odds
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial1mth
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    The intricate world that is described from Chapter 4 onwards is exciting stuff and we get deep into the mind of the nihilistic protagonist - this is a great contrast! It was a bit interesting to see (sfx splash!) to indicate sounds, but now we're used to this notation. Keep up the good work!

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    The Lazy King Of The Monsters
    Fantasy · BlackbellDagger
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial1mth
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    Agreed - this nuance in philosophy is something that my book also refers to. This shows just how common humanity is.

    In life, I've come to learn that there is no such thing as good or evil, the reasoning behind what's good for you and your people can be the cause of dead and devastation for another. Knowing this I can't condemn a man, who kills to protect something they hold dear, nor to a man who was raised to save countless lives. they do only what they know and learn, so you're definition of evil seems a bit redundant in that regard. So live by your choices, whatever it may be can't really jump to a clear good or bad conclusion.
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    The Lazy King Of The Monsters
    Fantasy · BlackbellDagger
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  • PGODofficial
    PGODofficial1mth
    Replied to Sara_Wilcox

    Thank you for saying that we're amazing... twice! We hope you follow the story through because there is more drama in development...

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    Playing Games Of Despair (Spirity)
    Fantasy · PGODofficial
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