The_High_Father
(Serious Review and Detailed Review) Hey, I saw that there's a little serious review here, so I thought "why not make one?", and here you go. Valli is a normal Asgardian and a Reincarnated guy from the Modern World. He is not Vali, Odin's son. Some people are still confused as it is right now, but here you go, Valli is a normal Asgardian and not Odin's son, named Vali. MC is reborn 100 years before Thor was born and so older than Thor. As the story goes on and the further we read, every happenings and events felt like "Natural". We can tell that the Author is well versed or just talented in telling stories as the Novel was always from the MC point of view. All the conversations, actions, are Natural and not forced like any other novels out there. I'm not saying all of them, but some of them are. The only downside is the Author's writing. We can already tell from the Synopsis of the story. But, as you can see at the amount of people Voting for this novel getting it as high as Top 5 in the FanFic section, and a Little amount of people complaining about it. I can be sure you will enjoy the story.Β Personally, I haven't read Marvel, and I can tell you, even though I haven't read it yet, I still enjoy the story. Why? Because of how you can effortlessly understand the story.Β (Overall Ratings) 2 Chapters a Day! Why not? So, 5 stars for me. Writing quality, sorry Author I have to be honest here, so 4 stars? I'm a little bit prejudiced, but hey, I will take the hate. Story Development. Smooth and Natural. 5 stars for me. Character Design. I'm honestly surprised how they were close or How the Author built the character naturally, befitting their status, so 5 stars. (Like how Odin is an Arrogant King, because he is a King and Powerful God, so why not?) World Background. It is Marvel, 5 Stars. That's all! Comment your thoughts or things I miss out, to have people understand more of the story! 40 Chapters Review (Completed) 100 Chapters Review (Not Complete) ...
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I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Wo. But...this is a Good Novel π
I give this story the max score becuase it is something new and intriguing. For once, the mc isn't Spiderman, Venom, or some X-Men guy, and Natasha Romanoff isn't his mindless harem drone after a few chapters. That being said, the story needs some improvement. There are some grammar mistakes and strange sentences, but nothing that is annoying. The author appears to be quite motivated and I hope he improves in the future because he has enough creative talent to write something interesting. This story isn't the best I have seen, but definitely an enjoyable read.
Read to chapter 57 (Serious Review): World Background (4stars) because it's fan-fiction...The writing Quality (4stars) is good but not the best I've seen but good, And the updates are frequent (5 stars) on that one, (3Stars) for Story development it's not bad but no great either, and for the grand finale and the rant I have been holding on for weeks (1STAR) FOR Character Design I would have given him (0Stars) if I could!! So MC is too much of a pussy getting suppressed left and right sometimes being powerful and other times not (that's how it felt to me at least) it felt like the author is trying to suppress his strength development as to not make him op but just fails miserably making him appear useless and just keeps acting like a kid, and he is too indecisive for my taste So I know the author wants to make it seem logical and act like real human beings but honestly, I am not here to read logical and real stuff am here to enjoy what little time I have to entertain my self I don't give a shit how real or logical it appears, that's why a lot of people like Chinese protags because they are not that annoying to read it gives you a sense of excitement and they are mostly decisive and act illogical even though you know they shouldn't act like that BUT people still read them As I said this is a novel...its fantasy...its purpose is to entertain...but what do I know this is your book and you are free to write it as you like some people may like this style...but I don't, those are just my though take from them what you want (if any) and improve yourself as to become a better writer Peace!
A complete 5-Stars but even I have to say that there are some things in the Novel that don't make it a 5-Stars. Well, I like the Novel a lot so maybe I am a bit subjective here...but who cares π€·ββοΈ Writing Quality [ Better than the average Webnovel Novel and honestly good except this is mostly written with simple English but we are here for shit and giggles . If we want a nearly perfect Novel than we should read thing from Ernest Hemingway or whomever.] Story Development [ Absolute perfect up to date ] Character Design [ I just hope that he won't be supressed by Odin if he leaves because it looks like he will.] Updating Stabilty [ 3 chapters a day ..what do you want more ?] World Background [ Nothing to complain here( some things are twisted and changed but that was because the Author wanted it and not because he didn't know it )] (An: English isn't my mother language and I don't prove read so....deal with it )
3 times I find fanfic where Vali is Odin's son. The name Thor means the god of thunder. The name Loki means the god of deception. Wali's name is (position) - a position in the administration of Islamic countries corresponding to the position of the governor of a province or other administrative unit into which the country is divided Wali (guardian) is a guardian in Islamic family law. Vali (name) (Arabic: ΩΩΩ) is a male name of Arabic origin meaning "close", "native", "saint" Wali (saint) - in Islam, a righteous person who is zealous in prayers, remembrance of Allah and other types of worship. Sufis have a saint who can have supernatural powers Al-Wali is one of the names of Allah, used in the meaning of "friend", "companion" Personalities Vali (mythology) - god of vengeance in Germanic-Scandinavian mythology Vali (Ramayana) - character of the ancient Indian epic Ramayana, father of Angada Wali Muhammad (1605-1611) - the second khan of the Bukhara Khanate from the Uzbek dynasty of the Janids - Ashtarkhanids. You see, it doesn't really fit this fanfiction. Translated by google translator.
Just bad man.. read a lot of chapters and the writing quality instead of getting better got worse and worse.. Machine translated novels can be read way easier. You can see from from the first glance that the author never proofread his work, not because the grammar is bad.. but because of lots and lota of spelling mistakes and repeated words. Man i did not have a good time reading this
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