Review Detail of zPray in Marvel: A God's Journey.

huh? well, i didn't described the mc because i wanted the readers to use their imagination. he is Friend with heimdall, sif, Brynhildr, and odin sees him as an interesting asgardian.

You should describe him, that's your "job" not ours.

i don't have to job!🙃

"I don't have to job" okay? I don't know what you wanted to say with this, but why is it so hard to describe the mc? This is not Wattpad.

Btw, i recommend changing the title from "marvel: a God's journey" to "Marvel: A God's Journey" it look's way better that way, atleast imo.

i didn't have opportunity

ok

what? why don’t you want us to use your imagination? you’re talking about taking away one of the main reasons a person reads. one suggestion is that you start writing chapters of other characters’s visions to give a better view of how people close to him see him

maybe...i will write a character chapter

yeah the reader imagines characters, and not just the mc but all characters, however that imagining is usual based off of the description supplied by the author. my version of a woman described as being 6 ft tall with dusky skin, green eyes and dark black hair is going to be different than everyone else's.