I think your doing good, you seem into world building and setting up exposition still so it would only make sense that it would take a while for to heat up.

Tyfc

To be honest have not read this yet, but love Skyrim. However, I am skeptical of AI written books so I'm going to wait for some more review too get the scoop before I invest my time in.

too short

I know this is a translation but i want to thank you for removing most of the poison that Chinese people put in their novels this is way better.

Can you clarify how the original author ruined it?

Can you clarify i seem to not see the message?

I like it alot the power system and the progression is good too. Very surprised this one isn't more known. This is Harem tho and they more only focus on Dany than anything for his partner.

Why would he do that he knows snapes just going to target him more now?

i liked the filers in this case i felt they gave a little character development

+1

Should have killed edmure

+1

+1

does he though isnt the force a mind power maybe they just use hands to focus or something

position yourself to take over the reach

Plot twist her son is actually Fang Ming reincarnated as her child instead of leylin

Or as I like to call it the Burger King breathing technique 🤭

OC

So far only at 8th chapter but its seems very good and very consistant in the world view its building, I also like the time point its place on to start with havent seen many robert rebellion fanfics either always at the start or close to the start of the series or house of the dragon timeline