The Stupidity i see will kill me faster than this lung cancer im slowly cultivating.
Only gripe i have about this is his seemingly infinite energy as he just keeps throwing beam after beam, like... Is he a stamina monster or is the devil fruit just costless? In most fics uaing devil fruit usually eats stamina or physical strength.. what gives??
How daheck did she guess hes from the future just from describing something from a movie.... where did the leap of logic come from... and i dont even know if shes serious or not... makes the scene feel so ditached... im gonna read a few more chapters.. but im already thinking of dropping this
Its good if you stick to the direct writing style consistently, theres also a trick in which to drop hints in this type of storytelling.. im still reading it as of today im at ch 39.. the following 2 chapters from this chapter i filled me in with what i was missing. which is fortunate because im binge reading. But if i was reading it when it was releasing, id have waited a day or two and wouldve lost attention.. keep it up i look forward to your writing. It keepa me relaxed
This chapter really makes me wanna drop it.. not because of the story.. just the way you write it. Some authors write in a way that has a little bit of foreshadowing thats not noticeable, something very subtle. but with your writing style that is quick and to the point(which isn't bad) it just doesnt subconsciously prepare anyone for an acceptable twist.. that it just leaves me hanging with a weird sense of disappointment.
I miss the days when a system is just a system... novels nowadays give the system too many annoying features.. what ever happened to work with what you got.. now even the system can be begged for anything... makes the system lose its uniqueness and mystery if any host can just bargain with it.
Take a break dude.. you've been updating in great speeds lately that this new chapter is full of awkward mistakes. Example... when he said he didnt experience men???? Like whut.. it just sounds gay, proper response should have been "you just havent seen someone as unique as me" Also stopped reading at halfway point of this chapter cause im sleep deprived and dont wanna confuse myself so id check back on this tomorrow... nyt
I once had a flame war in the komi manga comment section and told the troll to write a story which contains what his preferred version of komi should go... and i hope that wasnt you cause im liking this version and i dont wanna admit im wrong to a stranger on the internet.
Yes.. but think about how minato is an orphan borne ninja that used hiraishin thousands of times.. the chakra hes got he got through training.. also not really about size.. depends more on how much chakra the summon needs i.e the old toads. While naruto over there had to tap into the 9 tails when he had first summoned the boss toad.. if thats how hiraishin works man.. how many 9 tails does minato have in him