Henry_Hyren
The cover is beautiful... :) The title is catchy.. :) And the plot.. speechless.. it really seeking attention. I love these kinda stories and I am tbh already waiting for the next chapters. A wonderful plot and the most exciting part will be the forbidden love story. The pace of the story is perfect and the character description and story narrations are wonderful. Waiting for the story to unfold. Good Work.:)
Lightning's attraction is a book of fiction made by Henry_Hyren. The main audience of the story are cultivator fans and anyone who's in love with the genre. The story is told in a good way of narration that I've personally fallen in love with. What I like about the book is the creativity spent to think of unique Chinese names. (Maybe because I don't read these kind of novels, hehe.) Even now, I couldn't pronounce their names properly, The flaws of the book includes some grammatical mistakes that could be easily fixed with proofreading. Word choice is great, but I've noticed some words were used repeatedly such as cower in fear. Character design is is also a flaw as it lacked descriptions of various characters aside from apparel. I was able to picture the scenarios clearly, so this will cover up for the CD. That is all I could criticize about, the rest are great. Overall, it was an interesting read. -Dann Giovanni
A great cultivation book! I highly recommend this one. I'll try to review this book with no spoilers xD. Basically, you get two choi.. oof! Alright, seriously now. The book start off a bit heavy for me since there was too much information. Well, this is expected for a cultivation novel. The overall pacing is alright, you just have to improve on the smoothness of the story. I don't know how to put it but there were parts that sound a bit broken like it doesn't really flow that much. But well, that's just my gut feeling so don't mind it too much. I really enjoyed it! I hope you keep updating since this novel is promising! Keep it up! ^ ^
Cons: The story development and character design of the story are very confusing. And I, who don’t read a lot of cultivation novels, am having a hard time understanding what is happening and how it relates and where the characters even go. Maybe others who read cultivation understands, but for readers who don’t- I can say that this will be utterly confusing in the long run. Pro: However, I do like how well written it is. I hardly see any major punctuation or grammar errors at all, which is great. Other than some he/she mixups I think. Overall, the story is decent from the information I’m receiving. Although, I would recommend that you explain more thoroughly about cultivation and the characters who wield such powers to avoid confusion. But don’t feel down author ! You can always improve, and time and effort will never cheat you. Keep up the good work ! (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭ꠥ⁾⁾