Review Detail of LinYang in Lightning's Attraction

Item: Lightning's Attraction
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

LinYangLv23yrLinYang

Overall, pretty good quality. The sentences run smoothly and the author has a good grasp on grammar and things. The plot could pick up pace a little more, though. Keep on writing, author! Looking forward to seeing you grow!

Lightning's Attraction

Henry_Hyren

Liked it!

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Henry_HyrenAuthorHenry_Hyren

I appreciate the insight. When I have a more solid plot and story direction, I will definitely edit them. In that way, the chapters would have more content, haha. And thanks for the encouragement

3yr