Beornhardt
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This story is a good read. I like how we got to see the MC's life before he died, it really gives us a good insight to his character and his motivations. We get to see the MC's thought process throughout which were very realistic and compelling. He doesn't get dark and neither does this story become a quest for revenge which is pretty awesome, it shows he is mature and rational which I love in a character. There's a few minor errors with punctuation and grammar but that can easily be fixed with a proofread. So far the story is interesting and I'd love to see more. Keep up the good work.
Tbh, I already read this book like 5 days ago and I like it. This kind of genre especially weak to strong ones are what I like. You'll really feel attached to the MC as he grows stronger. I'd love to give a 5-star rating but I can see dome obvious tenses mistakes. But you can easily fix this by proofreading though so no offense. Hope you continue updating!
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nice novel! pacing is really nice, choice of words is good and the overall writing is great. in terms of the story, it's really interesting and i have no complaints whatsoever. there aren't too many characters being introduced which makes the characters easy to remember. this is a thumbs up for me!!