thanks for noticing that, I’ll try to stay away from it when needed. :))

It is based on his level.

lol I still revised it anyway. I placed some explanations and descriptions of their clothing in chapter 24 if I remember correctly. Thanks for your suggestion earlier!

p.s. she’s supposed to look like this lol, but without the sword plus her black cardigan.

Bruh when did you ever see a support/healer wearing steel armor lol. As for why she’s wearing kimono...because I want her to. 😑 Where did it say that I can’t make someone wear something that’s not their culture. It’s fiction ffs don’t get it mixed in with ur stuff. As for where they took out the weapon, you’ll know it when you read chpt 26. But yes, the mc being distracted when he’s seen her from the start doesn’t make sense. It’ll need a bit of revision. Anyway, thanks for your honest comment! This types of comments really help improve the overall quality of the novel.

to entice someone to join lol

both lol.

She’s based on a game character, just changed the name a little bit to avoid issues lol. But if the name’s too unbearable, then I’ll consider changing it. Thanks for the reminder though. :))

It does, blood is highly corrosive to steel and will cause it to rust in no time if not wiped.

Read a few chapters and here’s my thoughts on it. It’s a great read, the choice of words along with the writing style and great storyline make for an incredible story. I sincerely think that your book has great potential. Hope you see it till the end, keep up the good work! :)

Thanks for the question thoo, really appreciate it! :))

The anomaly was ranked c+ to begin with, so receiving wounds as a b ranked hunter was normal. What wasn’t normal was how Marcus could fight evenly with the anomaly lol.

Read a bit from your book and I could say that it was a good read. I also liked your writing style. Good job and Hope you could finish writing it until the end!

there hehehe 😈 fixed it. :>

plot hole detected o.O thank you for pointing that out!! I’ll fix it right away lol.

It’s something like this -> The creator isnt there but the system is automated so it still exists. It’s kind of a thing that’s already been set, that’s why he lost majority of his powers. dunno if that explained anything lol, but yeah that’s the main idea of it.

Thanks for the honest revieww, it seems line tenses and punctuations are things that needed to be fixed in the novel. I’ll look into it as soon as I can. Thanks again!! :))

Read a few chapters and here’s my thoughts on it. It’s a great read, the choice of words along with the writing style and great storyline make for an incredible story. I sincerely think that your book has great potential so I added it to my library. Hope you see it till the end, keep up the good work! :)

Hey, i read the first four chapters from your work, though it’s still ongoing I can see it’s potential and it was a really good read. Hope you see it to the end and keep up the good work! :))

No worries xD