In the free chapters MC is not an antihero. I didn’t read further because nothing grab my attention to make me curious enough to pay to read further and that is my personal choice as it was yours to buy a book beforehand. When there are literally thousands of stories on here you need something to grab people’s attention to get them to want to read. It didn’t get my attention due to lack of worldbuilding as well as no information from n how the system will work later in the novel. If it follows every other zombie system then it would get boring and repetitive I would like to know in advance that is all

A little yes but I did eventually drop this one. Story went a direction I personally didn’t care for but to each their own

Me to I think they meant to say is such a win but they put whim as in whimsical

Martial arts not marshelarts is this a a wild west story

When did he gain shapeshifting

I notice you repeat paragraphs at times let’s not do this to increase word count in a chapter it’s cheap and lazy

I can’t give your story a proper review since I could not read past chapter 2. Please fix the grammar so I can try again.

Since this story is over a year old and the grammar is still not fixed I will pass on reading this one. If you care about your story edit your work and make it best you can. Almost every sentence is messed up. Going from his/him to her or their. Changing perspectives mid paragraph. Random grammatical errors everywhere

Play all day to get my moneys worth

Why do you keep saying hard work money. Hard earned money would sound more natural to English speakers.

Hope frequency of updates improves soon

It’s on my to read list I like to binge watch/ read so I’ll keep an eye out to see when I should start reading

When it hits 50 chapters I’ll read it thanks

Not eating someone that is alive and making a zombie he has not at least not in the free chapters

Got any of them new chapters for me

Read what was free for a reference point: writing quality is good as far as grammar goes. Can use some editing to fix small mistakes and clarify things better. At times the same thing is repeated over and over adding no new details to further the story just the word count. World building is going slow but progressing but at the same time a lot of details are skipped or glossed over in my opinion. The main character has no developments yet as far as getting attached or invested in his adventure for answers. Wish he would have eaten someone by now or at least used his new skill. New story so it’s hard to speak about update stability but there isn’t over 50 chapters yet. Wish the writer luck with their story

When it hits 50 chapters I will but looks like you bounce from one idea to the next and don’t stick with it pick one story and complete it no matter if it is a hit or not just be passionate about your story

Some of them he didn’t even

You pretty much repeated the sentence about the smell liking someone from lack of oxygen. Just increases word count without adding to the story in any way

Don’t need to say trapped after saying trapping them with shields