Goddess-Of-Dawn
This story has so much potential, but it’s lost in errors. First, the chapters are not in order, and most chapters are repeated. There are no transitions between paragraphs. It’s very easy to get confused while reading due to the mixed up chapters and non transitional paragraphs. There are a few grammatical and mechanical missteps, those are few, and easy to overlook. The biggest issue is how the author mixes up characters names. There is a character named Amy and a character named Aurora, in one chapter, the author used their names interchangeably. The main MLI is named Aurelius, and around chapter 40, his name suddenly becomes Kieran. The ending of the story drops off. It feels like the author was tired of writing and stopped, called it the end. Like I said, this story has great potential. The plot is good and interesting. It needs reworking. Perhaps, the author can do some editing to fix these things, and re-post it on Webnovel, or another writing/reading platform.
This story has been by far the most annoying story i have read. Multiple upon multiple chapters are continuously repeated, so much so that it was such a waste of any point spent on it. The story was great but didnt actually have an end to it It has 72 chapters but in reality due to the repeated chapters, it was more like 40 chapters that you charged me for 72. Annoyed beyond belief
Up until chapter 17, the book is fine. But as soon as you hit chapter 17, you suddenly run into duplicate chapters that you already read. Plot holes of missing information that isn't explained. Either whole chapters are completely missing, or chapters are posted out of order. The author needs to fix these errors, then maybe I'll return to finish reading the story. It's too bad, because the story was actually pretty good until all the chapter upload errors started appearing. Fix the chapters inside the book, and I will update my Review.
I love the characters, the writing and storyline. Three things : 1. Editing required due to spelling and grammar problems. 2. The chapters are jumbled and repeated. Which ruined the flow of the reading. 3. No ending - you left it on a complete Cliff hanger. It didn’t seem to be on purpose. Please finish your book - I’m dying to find out how everything plays out. Your writing is amazing I really felt like I was there and I was hanging on every word.
This book has a lot potential eoth a great FL chatacter and plot comcept but unfortunately the author seems to have had a lot of problems wirh uploading chapters out of order, duplicating chapters and making amateur errors such as changing the ML name part way through which may also be an issue of not knowing how to exit after uploading. worst of all of course is that no new updates have been provided in at least five months so all readers are left in a cliffhanger situation.
I will first say that I was enjoying this very much, and so I unlocked the whole book, but unfortunately I regret it. The only issue I had, which was a very big issue for me, was that the chapters were out of order and some chapters were repeats. I couldn't take the back and forth chapters that actually spoiled the story. I enjoyed everything that I read but I regret paying the money for it. BTW the chapters do not start messing up until after the free chapters.
This book had potential to be a great one. I loved the storyline and characters but the one constant flaw with this book was the repetition of chapters and the fact that many of us wasted our coins in hopes that the writer would rectify the problem but they didn’t. There are at least 10 if not more repeated chapters which means we the readers were swindled and I am still shocked that the author has not once communicated or responded to his or her readers and that is unacceptable thus the low rating for what could have been a very good book.