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AlvarieB

AlvarieB

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2021-10-05 JoinedUnited States
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Posted

    DNF Plot seemed like it was going in a good direction but I couldn't get passed the non-quotation dialog. It was hard to understand if someone was talking, thinking internally, or narrating. Other than that the story was decent.

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    Alpha of the Rogues
    Fantasy ¡ burntbrulee
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Posted

    I will first say that I was enjoying this very much, and so I unlocked the whole book, but unfortunately I regret it. The only issue I had, which was a very big issue for me, was that the chapters were out of order and some chapters were repeats. I couldn't take the back and forth chapters that actually spoiled the story. I enjoyed everything that I read but I regret paying the money for it. BTW the chapters do not start messing up until after the free chapters.

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    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy ¡ Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Replied to MushpilShroom

    The first and second book are on Galatea under the same title as this. I haven't read/purchased the second yet because I heard it too had a cliffhanger.

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    Hated By My Mate
    Fantasy ¡ Nathalie Hooker
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Replied to Robin_Bain_Eubanks

    Did book 2 have a cliffhanger too?

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    Hated By My Mate
    Fantasy ¡ Nathalie Hooker
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Replied to Kira_Eastwood

    I was going to purchase it on Amazon but it's only for Kindle, is there another way to read it? I also wanted to reread the first book.

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    I Became the Villain Of a Book
    Fantasy ¡ Kira_Eastwood
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    2nd read, still love this chapter.

    "It's done then, Alpha Dawn will be mated to Beta Finn within the year, and Alpha Dawn will get to keep her Alpha titles, you are all dismissed!" The council yells out, escaping the courtroom before any arguments could be made…
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    Darkest Before the Dawn
    Fantasy ¡ amateurFiction
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    That was a very short chapter 😔

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    The Female Alpha
    Fantasy ¡ Anna Kendra
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    Glad to see this book has older characters, rather than all teens, barely of age.

    I growled again. Yes, that exactly was my problem. In the past couple years; everyone seems to be giving me advice on getting a goddamned Luna! I was only fucking thirty two and that was hardly like being a teenager in werewolf terms. I wasn’t going anywhere anytime soon and all this talk about getting a Luna was only fueling interest amongst the female wolves who now thought it was alright to expect more out of a simple one-night stand and were pressuring me for a ring. Damnit!
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    The Female Alpha
    Fantasy ¡ Anna Kendra
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    Fast paced, which is nice, hopefully it can keep my attention.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    The Alpha King
    Fantasy ¡ chillnutella
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Replied to AlvarieB

    Paragraph breaks not chapter breaks.

    Ch 2 The last day of senior year
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    The Blood Luna
    Fantasy ¡ Trublood_3
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    I might have teared up... 😢

    Ch 17 Going Home
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    The Dragon Empress Happily Ever After
    Fantasy ¡ Gumibear
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    I am loving this! ❤

    Ch 16 Chosen One
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    The Dragon Empress Happily Ever After
    Fantasy ¡ Gumibear
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    So frustrating! I'm loving it though!

    Ch 3 Crown Prince
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    The Dragon Empress Happily Ever After
    Fantasy ¡ Gumibear
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    But of course someone will.

    "Oh well, not like anyone goes into my room anyways."
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    The Dragon Empress Happily Ever After
    Fantasy ¡ Gumibear
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Posted

    Enjoyed this very much! It was a simple read but there was enough to vision the story. I had my doubts at first but I ended up purchasing the whole thing because I couldn't stop reading. I love the happy ending and the pairing, it was my "ship" since they first met. Thank you for the good read. 😁

    altalt
    Darkest Before the Dawn
    Fantasy ¡ amateurFiction
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    Perfect!

    "It's done then, Alpha Dawn will be mated to Beta Finn within the year, and Alpha Dawn will get to keep her Alpha titles, you are all dismissed!" The council yells out, escaping the courtroom before any arguments could be made…
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    Darkest Before the Dawn
    Fantasy ¡ amateurFiction
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    I thought she was supposed to be like a lone wolf? So far it seems as though she had been blessed with some sort of good company.

    “I think we should live here.” I explain and they still look at me a little confused except for Patrick of course, who is currently out of my sight, presumably hiding in the grass taking a nap.
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    Darkest Before the Dawn
    Fantasy ¡ amateurFiction
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    Got my answer. I pictured a young girl first, then an older teen, I'm glad to know her actual age now.

    I could hear a howl somewhere in the distance, signalling my presence to the rest of the pack. I keep the borderline in my sights, pushing my legs the as fast as they could go. Though, realistically how could the legs of a fourteen year old girl out run fully grown wolves.
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    Darkest Before the Dawn
    Fantasy ¡ amateurFiction
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    How old is she?

    I creep around the back of the house, quietly scaled the small wooden fence, and snuck up to the house. Leaning against the side of the house, I walk over to the window and peek my head over the edge of the windowsill. Inside the house were two children at least three years younger than me, sitting at the kitchen table. I watched with sad eyes as their mother walked in with two bowls of warm porridge. I could smell the honey covered oats from where I was crouched. The sight alone made me drool and want to sing hallelujah. I have tried my hardest to forget about everyone, but I couldn't help but wonder of my mother and whether or not she was even alive. Last time I saw her she was lying badly injured on an infirmary stretcher.
    altalt
    Darkest Before the Dawn
    Fantasy ¡ amateurFiction
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  • AlvarieB
    AlvarieB2yr
    Commented

    Every time I read "flight of stairs" I wonder if someone is going to "fall" down them.

    Lacey headed down the five flights of stairs, and when she entered the intimate dining room, the table was filled with many people. Some had swatches in various colors, and some had boards with drawings.
    altalt
    The Alpha's Companion
    Fantasy ¡ Theresa Oliver
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