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Jumping 20 to 30 feet is cool and all but realistically he would have never saw the gloves that were that high. The average story in a building is about 14 feet so 28 would be on the top of the second story. So he would be jumping to reach the third floor of a building to get a pair of gloves
This is a bit confusing. You reffernce a sentence up that lilly saw Dawn on His arm but not Then state after that that she saw him and that her plan worked. She had seen him already.