Too many chapters and too much author commentary after just a few paragraphs . And I realize it's not her first language but someone really should have proofread this.

The coachman didn't drop Grace off. he was killed too! The story is incorrect here.

what kind of ending is this? where is the rest of the story?

The chapters were all mixed up and out of order. And it was often impossible to figure out where the story picked up after the last chapter. And the ending, if it actually was the ending, sucked.