During the Revolution that Sunny wished that he had never been a slave to Nephis, it must have started an alternative timeline. But Sunny woke up the next morning stuck in this loop.

I hope you will write another sequel. The story is great, the world you created is intriguing. There are so many questions I have about where things will go after this - so much potential material to create additional stories. I want to know aboyt Mae and Chet and any of the other females who were so traumatized— if they were able to get back together with their mates or find new ones. How they as a society overcame the sadness of so many mates pairs not being able to have children. Does Zev replace Lerrin at some point? Whether the tribes in the future integrate by animal type instead of anima vs chimera as mating pairs and future generations blur the distinction. Or if there are a lot of unique animal types will they have a challenging time rearranging the heirarchies. If the humans Zev overheard in Thana in the 2040’s timeline are an indication they found a new gateway into Anima (in the future). How the dragon kids can find a way to “fit in” being so unique. If the Bears ever join society. If a Bear can mate with an owl what would happen in winter? . How many of the Creatures actually survived after the two rounds of heart-breaking slaughter we saw, and any Sasha met. What becomes of the family stuck in the big house in the human side. I even want to know little details about how the portals being open to Protectors (and Zan) impact their daily life. Do people in Anima continue to make everything or do Protectors bring things like cooking pots through from the human side? Did Zan(e) create any offspring through all his nights out in the clubs? The Team would want to hunt them down? Also what about the Avatars? Seems like there is so much more to know about that when we catch up to the time they created them. There’s a lot of potential to build on all that you have created.

I just had to wonder why they built their secret base so far from the gateway, and why they would not have built the lab around the gateway and given it just as much security as everything else

This wording makes me nervous

Recording devices in the sanctuary ?

All this time he has been so angry that Oriana’s grandfather liked his mother, but here she is alive? This is very confusing.

Foreshadowing that he is connected to it- water will be part of his domain eventually

But he was eventually going to be enslaved by someone and it would have been a disaster had it been Mordret. Further what she did is what most people would have done after seeing someone murder somebody the way Sunny did, that is, tell their best friend about it.

It resets on the 1st of every month

Sunny, practice on a less important memory first!

That’s a super slow sleeping drug!

It seems to me perhaps he needs to wish specifically and carefully for things like finding Kai and Effie.

Sound barrier spell!

It’s him

Are there 13 million people floating around isolated on rafts in this boundless sea? If they had died already then I imagine the Spell would not have counted them at the welcome? I wonder how they are not dying from lack of food?

Makes no sense to replace plants mid winter with snow on the frozen ground. Too much of a stretch to get character alone.

How does Daniel not already know her name is Naomi and make the connection? Marcy already addressed her by name in front of him a few times. This is a bit far fetched.

Anyone else thinking Noah is a werewolf?

Actually a baby does control labor (when modern doctors are not interfering) so yes a baby can be born when the mother is in a coma. This is one of the most amazing facts about human bodies. At least IRL— no idea what the situation is in the author’s story.

That’s what I am hoping for too.