Review Detail of ElleFrost2303 in His Rogue Luna

I love the characters, the writing and storyline. Three things : 1. Editing required due to spelling and grammar problems. 2. The chapters are jumbled and repeated. Which ruined the flow of the reading. 3. No ending - you left it on a complete Cliff hanger. It didn’t seem to be on purpose. Please finish your book - I’m dying to find out how everything plays out. Your writing is amazing I really felt like I was there and I was hanging on every word.