Reviews of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

I love it. I love the story, I love the mc, I love the 3 other oc's added I love their interactions with each other or other characters, I love how the world is being changed, I love the daily uploads. All in all, its an incredible Harry Potter fanfiction with no needless bashing, it shows the dark sides of the wizarding world but also doesn't dwell on it and shows the light in it too. Honestly I think this would be my favourite HP fanfiction on this site.

Reading chapters 28 and 29 has showed me the mc doubts himself and his own power if he fights he will feel bad and guilty I don't like a pacifist and a wimpy person I so I have to drop this I thought this fanfic had potential but I was disappointed in the end

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One of the best here! Definitely worth reading! Awesome story! Awesome MC! Awesome family & family relationship! Awesome friends! Awesome love interest!

Let me be honest, the writing quality and story development is superb. Try to take a quick read before taking the responses honestly. I know some readers criticize the character, but let us be honest. The author created an entertaining protagonist with a head start fulfilling the Death couple's promise. Remember, one of his wishes is to develop a strong mind and a drive for improvement. So beware, it might seem illogical but the guy has reincarnated. He has enough life experience to keep him going throughout his torture including his occlumency. Now onto other things. The author has a good grasp of what is happening and what he wishes to change. The only real critique I have is he speeds through his daily life. He skims over months constantly with tabs of what he accomplished. The reason I don't like this writing choice is that he will run out of ideas to write about in the world and end his series with a hopefull at least 200 to 300 chapters. This is disappointing for such a well developed story however, like most fanfics, the authors have trouble continuing the story beyond the original's ending. I really hope you can come up with something after the Voldemort debacle ends. I would love to see if the author can take his story to a whole new height and create a more original story beyond what Rowling wrote. I truly loved this story. It was on a whole new level compared to some of the other fanfics depicted in Harry Potter's world. Hope the author doesn't lose motivation and creativity after the events depicted in the books and movies. Overall, a pleasure to read such a great fanfic with chapters with a great amount of content within.

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Will you be continuing writing this book?

Coming from chapter 12... The Mc is a Gary Stu wrapped in a blanket of an unnecessary cruel tortured and experimented on individual. His parents (especially his mother) left him on his own to be captured by DEs because she couldn't leave her husband alone who begged her to bring the children to safety. The DEs are all carbon copies of either Bellatrix after Azkaban or Crabbe and Goyle. The Mc cannot wait to practically expose all the meta knowledge he has and covers this up with the most ridiculous excuses ever. I mean: "I (a tortured 5 year old) learned magic sight in 3 months" "I (a 5 year old) have read about Legilimency in a book of my father" "I (a 8 year old) corrected mistakes in books and books about Harry Potter" I'm going to continue this fic regardless because of the lack of good HP-fics on this site and hope that it will get better...

Hello dear author I had a good suggestion that I wanted to tell you In my opinion, after the events of Harry Potter and the defeat of Voldemort and the peace of the wizarding world You can continue the novel in the world of Marvel, which is very famous. For example, you can, after graduation of Mc and a little research, Mc found that he is in the Marvel and magic world and if he don't help The world may be destroyed and he may lose his family. so he can Continue learning magic with Ancient one and then go to Azgard or whatever and strengthen his magic and body and finally save the world he like I think you can do it and it will be one of the best Harry Potter and marvel crosover novels Thanks for your Effort.

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Writing quality is really good, there are some mistakes but it's still good. Story dev. There is actually nothing new, it starts great and interesting but then the mc is contradictory to himself and just a happy singing kumbaya while holding hands with everyone. The author is evidently biased on Slytherin while preaching same rights to everyone, he is basically the same as Ron while being the trio sidekick. Character design nonexistent. Wold background nothing new.

wow, just wow. to the author of this fan fic who ever you are I just have to say, you crushed it. very well done job with the portrayal of your characters. great job with the MC, phenomenal job creating such a well thought out mindset and ideology.

I would absolutely give more than five stars if I could. This is a fanfic where I was so invested in it the whole 123 chapters nonstop. Once again author u did a phenomenal job writing this gem.

Brilliant novel, minor things i didn't like at start but came to enjoy about it Hope author doesn't quit 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters

I go to check the rankings and I see a new harry potter fanfic and I think oh maybe I can sink my teeth into this 10 chapter novel. Nope, 122 chapters right off the bat I haven't even read it yet but it looks good smells good and tastes good.

Simply amazing Fan Fiction you have here. I hope you go the distance as so far yours is the longest written HP fanfic on this site and it is one of the best! Please keep it up! [img=update]

basically good guy suffers then gets love loves return improve everyone but keep the plot I ntact for fear of .. just a plain story with rare momentsif you wanna get an idea to upgrade your world that's just written here plot is same just saves everyone good story but no interesting new concept just a masup of others

This is the first fanfic of significant size I've read. I'm stunned at how it good it was! One star off for spelling errors but I got used to them after a while

dear author i already read this masterpiece 3 time . i don't know if you are having any problem with your daily life. i am guessing that you have other responsibilities on your shoulders . and may god give you all the strength you needed . but please if you have any free time . PLEASE update new chapter for us. thank you 🙏

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