Review Detail of Luffy_For_The_Win in Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Let me be honest, the writing quality and story development is superb. Try to take a quick read before taking the responses honestly. I know some readers criticize the character, but let us be honest. The author created an entertaining protagonist with a head start fulfilling the Death couple's promise. Remember, one of his wishes is to develop a strong mind and a drive for improvement. So beware, it might seem illogical but the guy has reincarnated. He has enough life experience to keep him going throughout his torture including his occlumency. Now onto other things. The author has a good grasp of what is happening and what he wishes to change. The only real critique I have is he speeds through his daily life. He skims over months constantly with tabs of what he accomplished. The reason I don't like this writing choice is that he will run out of ideas to write about in the world and end his series with a hopefull at least 200 to 300 chapters. This is disappointing for such a well developed story however, like most fanfics, the authors have trouble continuing the story beyond the original's ending. I really hope you can come up with something after the Voldemort debacle ends. I would love to see if the author can take his story to a whole new height and create a more original story beyond what Rowling wrote. I truly loved this story. It was on a whole new level compared to some of the other fanfics depicted in Harry Potter's world. Hope the author doesn't lose motivation and creativity after the events depicted in the books and movies. Overall, a pleasure to read such a great fanfic with chapters with a great amount of content within.