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Cosray8d
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Coming from chapter 12... The Mc is a Gary Stu wrapped in a blanket of an unnecessary cruel tortured and experimented on individual. His parents (especially his mother) left him on his own to be captured by DEs because she couldn't leave her husband alone who begged her to bring the children to safety. The DEs are all carbon copies of either Bellatrix after Azkaban or Crabbe and Goyle. The Mc cannot wait to practically expose all the meta knowledge he has and covers this up with the most ridiculous excuses ever. I mean: "I (a tortured 5 year old) learned magic sight in 3 months" "I (a 5 year old) have read about Legilimency in a book of my father" "I (a 8 year old) corrected mistakes in books and books about Harry Potter" I'm going to continue this fic regardless because of the lack of good HP-fics on this site and hope that it will get better...

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Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

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SrCuervo
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Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.