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I usually read one novel at a time and a character with no ambition and only cares about survival is kinda boring no offense as far as your foreshadowing you blame it on the reader mabye you just did bad foreshadowing? I have read and enjoyed scifi novels before so that is null it's funny how you throw all the problems with your novel on the reader's
ok writing style some errors here and there very little to non existent character development 28 chapters in the mc is annoying enough I stopped reading I kept reading to 28 chapters hoping he would get some development but nothing happened which was disappointing to me another problem is the mc is said to be smart but at most he is average or below average intelligence you can see it in the decision's he makes
Another thing you said I found funny which is you have not finished a more then 2000 chapter novel so you can't comment on it or you try to use that to somehow discount my point is the most bs thing I have seen in while thanks for the laughs why would I read and finish a novel I don't like can't stop laughing priceless
I said what I thought was true if you don't agree I don't care the fact is greed without limits makes you a monster or beast if you like such characters then do what you want I don't care but don't assume everyone has to agree with you or I can't say what I think everyone has different options learn to live with it
Why would I feel butthurt when you literally think that your comedy is the only type of comedy is that low self esteem I sense? Because it should be common sense not all comedy are equal comedians should tell you that I feel disappointed of how you view people that don't pass your first chapter they don't think I am funny so they must have no sense of humor that's pretty childish thinking right there
Have you ever thought why some comedy appeals to some people but not to others? it boils down to taste and age the comedy you are showcasing may not appeal to a older audience that's it if you think that because someone does not enjoy your comedy that they no sense of humor is just wrong and ridiculous in fact its funny you think that at all
The reason psychology is important is because it helps make more believable characters psychology helps understand human nature and how humans interact and human behaviors knowing this can help you become a better writer in the future personally your novel just was not my taste it seemed kinda childish in the first chapter alone it did not have the mature vibe I was looking for I am sure a younger audience would probably enjoy your novel more then me good luck with your writing no one is a great writer in the beginning and not all audiences will enjoy a work thanks for reading