Review Detail of EnderPL in Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Writing quality is really good, there are some mistakes but it's still good. Story dev. There is actually nothing new, it starts great and interesting but then the mc is contradictory to himself and just a happy singing kumbaya while holding hands with everyone. The author is evidently biased on Slytherin while preaching same rights to everyone, he is basically the same as Ron while being the trio sidekick. Character design nonexistent. Wold background nothing new.