Reviews of Fighting For Eternity

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The way the characters were introduced was great, your attention to details makes it very easy to understand and your style of writing is really good. [img=recommend]

As a fantasy writer, I kinda like the premise of the story. Though I concentrated on western setting, having read this, made me interested with eastern setting. I am barely familiar with cultivation stories, and this one pulled me into reading. This is a breath of fresh air for me.

i just have just read the first few chapters.this story is very interesting! it really got me hooked from the very first chapter! and im looking forward for more chapter because its really a great book!

A decent quick read with a compelling story idea. The plot summary needs work, make it enticing and intriguing so it pulls the readers more. Give the readers a tease, tease them into reading the story and adding it to their library. It’s like click bait. There were a few grammatical errors like the writer tends to switch grammatical tense from past tense to present tense, which was normal because English was not the writer’s native language. The sentence case was adequate. As much as I love details, this story needs to explain it more properly. It felt lacking in explanation. Like explain how the ranking works in a more precise way so the readers could understand it. The writer did explained some topics but it needs more elaboration. World building needs work, describe the settings to make it more real. Take the time to set the scene. It makes the setting and the story feel more tangible. This goes also for the story development. The story development was sufficient, the story progresses without rushing too much but still managed to keep the story entertaining. In story wise, it is interesting especially when I recently noticed that reincarnation, soul switching and stuff like that seemed to be a trope here in this site. The story has a different approach to it, as it more focused on the protagonist growth and not the romance element, which was new to me but I did saw the tag of Harem. Usually, in the introduction the love interest is immediately introduced but in here, the writer decided to focus to the protagonist and the world building. Which I love about it. Keep up the good work!

Read Your Synopsis And I’m Quite Intrigued I’m going to start now i’ll leave comments along the line, and the idea of cultivation is amazing

My brain has turned into mush by reading the first 2 chapters, I think I've developed autism from the mass geocide that's destroyed my brain cells

I tried reading this story but I just couldn't get past the terrible grammar. The fact that I have to read over a single sentence multiple times before I find out what he's trying to say is absolutely ridiculous. It would be a wonderful story if the grammar and writing is fixed but until that day I suggest not to read

Why is the He written inseid quotation marks? Is he a female actually? Or Is he in deep stages of denial. .

Very bad writing and too much filler it sucks ........................................................................................................

Your world building is excellent and you have portrayed good character development. I believe your writing quality could have been much more excellent but it is understandable that English is not your first language and that is totally fine because you have been executing your writing well. The story has progressed very well thus far in the first five chapters and I enjoy the incorporation of the fighting arts and it's vivid display. I wish you all the best!

A good novel. The plot is really intriguing and I like it. But I recommend the author to explain well those that needed an in-depth explanation. Also, there are some mistakes but you could easily change those. Hoping for you to update more and see your improvements!

The few chapters in the beginning is mostly explaining about him, which is nice, because we get the general idea of our MC and the world he lives in. MC isn't already overpowered much, but he also struggles. You can see that as you read the book. My over all impression is that it's one of the interesting books I've read about cultivation. I just felt like the first few chapters needed a few editing so that the story could flow smoothly. By doing so, the writing style would also be more consistent. Waiting for more updates!😊

Interesting that it starts in a world of cultivation where cultivation itself is actively discouraged by the gods (or so it seems). Seems like certain aspects won't be explain directly so we'll have to pay close attention to understand everything Fei is going through.

Grammar could be better other then that astoundingly solid novel that fits all my tastes Only othe Problem besides grammar is its not fully free of course ik the author needs some way to make money so M just joking really.

The grammar is so bad it makes me wanna throw up. Everything else is completely fine, but then you have the most simple mistakes that shouldn’t even be there if he just reread what he was putting doen

The story is good and the plot and the world-building the mistakes on grammar are understandable. There are so many info dumps and filler every chapter there is another info and in the next chapter, there is also. It's like never-ending info, you can make an auxiliary chapter about powers and all so even if we have forgotten what you write because of many info we can read it. The relationship is forced sometimes that's why it is sometimes awkward.

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Really good premise especially about founding his Legions army. Nepali honi chance payo bhane garx ni. Bro i am also from Nepal and have recently gotten into this genre during this lockdowns and started writing recently , and had seen your comment about discord for Nepali Authors in the webnovel Could you hook me in & also i am pretty new to this Webnovel platform and don't know about its coin system could you enlighten me.