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Review Detail of Henry_Hyren in Fighting For Eternity

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The few chapters in the beginning is mostly explaining about him, which is nice, because we get the general idea of our MC and the world he lives in. MC isn't already overpowered much, but he also struggles. You can see that as you read the book. My over all impression is that it's one of the interesting books I've read about cultivation. I just felt like the first few chapters needed a few editing so that the story could flow smoothly. By doing so, the writing style would also be more consistent. Waiting for more updates!😊

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Fighting For Eternity

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Thank you for you suggestion. I will do my best

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Thank you for your words