Review Detail of Kaisen1 in Fighting For Eternity
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The story is good and the plot and the world-building the mistakes on grammar are understandable. There are so many info dumps and filler every chapter there is another info and in the next chapter, there is also. It's like never-ending info, you can make an auxiliary chapter about powers and all so even if we have forgotten what you write because of many info we can read it. The relationship is forced sometimes that's why it is sometimes awkward.
Fighting For Eternity
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Indeed relationships are forced, but trust can be developed. People always admired heroes, but in reality, they only envy them. Here, mc is building a forced relationship to keep the development of trust, brotherhood, and love in later chapters. I could go with slow relationship development but the story doesn't tend to work that way. The main story starts from the second volume, as for never ending info, you can just ignore some while remembering important one's.