Review Detail of MiaSilver in Fighting For Eternity

Your world building is excellent and you have portrayed good character development. I believe your writing quality could have been much more excellent but it is understandable that English is not your first language and that is totally fine because you have been executing your writing well. The story has progressed very well thus far in the first five chapters and I enjoy the incorporation of the fighting arts and it's vivid display. I wish you all the best!