Review Detail of Illusionniste in Fighting For Eternity

A decent quick read with a compelling story idea. The plot summary needs work, make it enticing and intriguing so it pulls the readers more. Give the readers a tease, tease them into reading the story and adding it to their library. It’s like click bait. There were a few grammatical errors like the writer tends to switch grammatical tense from past tense to present tense, which was normal because English was not the writer’s native language. The sentence case was adequate. As much as I love details, this story needs to explain it more properly. It felt lacking in explanation. Like explain how the ranking works in a more precise way so the readers could understand it. The writer did explained some topics but it needs more elaboration. World building needs work, describe the settings to make it more real. Take the time to set the scene. It makes the setting and the story feel more tangible. This goes also for the story development. The story development was sufficient, the story progresses without rushing too much but still managed to keep the story entertaining. In story wise, it is interesting especially when I recently noticed that reincarnation, soul switching and stuff like that seemed to be a trope here in this site. The story has a different approach to it, as it more focused on the protagonist growth and not the romance element, which was new to me but I did saw the tag of Harem. Usually, in the introduction the love interest is immediately introduced but in here, the writer decided to focus to the protagonist and the world building. Which I love about it. Keep up the good work!