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Alrighty here we go after reading 8 chapters in! I love how the author creates a way for us to resonate with Ren and his anger by switching between past and present, and its done wonderfully at the right moments, it feels so natural to visualize it, almost like an opening to a movie. The build up and action scenes are admirable, they were so vivid and realistic, also easy to visualize, I think I can take some tips from how the action scenes are written. There's a charm to the Mc's mature nature but we can also see the child in him still yearning for justice. Author nim has conveyed emotions and scenes very well so i'd definitely recommend this!
oof thats gotta be painful
truly love author nim's style and the suspense building behind the truth
his parents....boy you better take revenge! kill them all! this chapter had me crying
i swear im crying
noooooo mama
loved the action in this chappy
nooooo i can feel the angst building
my heart! ahhh papa's smiles are always the best