Gravedagger
I really don't understand how it only has 4.3 stars and so less viewers I . mean this is the best novel I have seen in a while, for people who think it's about business war and blah blah blah, it's not. it's about a guy named arc grand who works as a labor due to his parents being in coma nad he has to take care of his sisters one day after returning he gets a factory system and he builds his empire, and people it's a very simple novel with really limited fight and blah blah, the only thing the mission are like 10 chaps I bet u can adjust, I truly recommend , it's a hidden gem.
First the story is awesome..... Grammar is good and the character building and world background are the most "Noticable" Best quality in this book as the author is trying exhausting his all to create a fullfilling book for us to enjoy... Let us review and vote the book so every other Dao friend can revel in enlightenment .......
Its a good novel with good story. Author have a brilliant idea. You gonna find it more interesting as the story progress. If you find it not to your liking about the grammar and so on. Please give author a change and try to be patient. It start rather badly. Not the story but the grammar and how there are too many symbol and dialogue that are in the same format as narative. But as the story go on. The symbol became better(less) and grammar became more readable and also the dialogue get more in position. But overall the story is good
I love the story and kingdom building! I also enjoy how the mc is op. Some may dislike it, but I think it's perfect. I also enjoy how quickly the story goes, since there is a lot that can go on. This keeps it at a good speed so that readers don't get bored. Keep up the great work. You are doing great!