KingofMortals
I am a freelancing EDITOR and A Cover page artist. Current works include FactoryINC and Galactic technological Library. I read sci-fi and realistic fiction novels. Discord: KingofMortals#9454
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KingofMortals2mthPosted"Embarking on 'The Heavenly Prince Descents' was a delightful journey filled with unexpected twists and captivating storytelling. The author skillfully weaves a tale of reincarnation, friendship, and cultivation in a world where martial artists exist. The characters, especially Dawn Celestus, are well-developed, each carrying a unique charm that adds depth to the narrative. The author's writing style is both engaging and descriptive. Scenes come to life with vivid details, and the cultivation aspects are explained seamlessly without overwhelming the reader. I found myself easily immersed in the world of Spring Dale and Fortune Nation, drawn in by the intriguing blend of mortal and celestial realms. The novel introduces an interesting take on cultivation techniques, such as the Nine Turns Of Heaven Sutra, which adds a layer of depth to the protagonist's journey. Dawn's determination and resilience shine through, creating a character worth rooting for. The pacing is well-managed, balancing moments of introspection with action sequences. Saffron's supportive role adds a heartwarming touch to the story, and the anticipation of Trevor's mysterious involvement keeps the plot engaging. What stood out the most was the author's ability to convey the essence of the lower realm and the challenges faced by the characters. This, coupled with Dawn's intriguing past life, creates a compelling narrative that leaves the reader eager for more. In conclusion, 'The Heavenly Prince Descents' is a gem for fans of cultivation novels, offering a well-crafted plot, memorable characters, and a world that beckons exploration. I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter in Dawn's journey, eager to see how his quest for strength and justice unfolds."
- KingofMortals11mthCommented
My man inherited the Lawrence dudes personality I guess. Hopefully he will as smart and collected throught out.
Evelyn turned her face to look at him and did not know why she found him strangely confident. He had been analyzing things ever since they had entered the premise. He was acting quickly and without hesitation as well. However, in this situation, he could deduce the enemy's primary motive, which signified that he had grasped the way Percival was thinking. - KingofMortals11mthCommented
not time for
A scream followed the shot, and a bright fire lit up. Christoph shot an enemy hiding in the shadow. Evelyn was surprised that she missed the enemy, but it was time for self-doubt. The fire illuminated the rest of the corridor, and Christoph began firing his gun. - KingofMortals11mthCommented
ooooh.. is this the kind of blood sucking experience in this world. Hehe.. [img=proud]
He did not understand what was going on. However, the surprise came when Evelyn began to moan every time he sucked the blood off her nape. The lady had freed her hands and was now holding Christoph's head and pressing it to her nape. - KingofMortals11mthCommented
A good trashing is always a good start for a bright character future.
Christoph looked down and was surprised. - KingofMortals11mthCommented
First quest: control your character and find your way through the silver moon manor.
Ambrosia did not turn around and said, "You wish to learn more about your new reality. Take this short exploration as a practice. After you are dressed, come and find me." - KingofMortals11mthCommented
how did get that far? in that dead state of his.? must have taken days to float along the water right?
Christoph sighed and thought, 'To think I would flow so far with the current, how is that possible? The Pearl water river originates north of the Godesay Glacier, deep in the Triumph Mountain range. Then it flows south from Alms Nation and enters the Fowl Nation. The distance from home is at least a couple of thousand kilometers.' - KingofMortals11mthCommented
fear not vincet. your batman Will live on!!
Vincent nodded and said, "I wonder if this one will make it out on his feet." - KingofMortals11mthCommented
If you introduce another lady more beautiful than her, I willl loose faith in beauty.
The lady was so beautiful that no words could describe her. She was elegant, poise, and charming, akin to the moon in the night skies, alluring. - KingofMortals11mthCommented
The fate of protagonist is much stronger than bonds of atoms.
His brain processed the details, but he could not come to terms with the scene before him. The aloof voice sounded again, "You have seven broken ribs, two broken vertebrae. The neural network below the waist is also non-responsive. The bones in your arms are shattered and cannot be repaired. Half of your face is disfigured, and your jaw is shattered too. There is also a spot of your skull that caved in. I wonder how you are even alive." - KingofMortals1yrReplied to Young_fruit_Smiley
And I do not want to make them too OP just from the start. Nanites are already too op with what they can achieve, so nerfing was required lol.
He then willed the Nanites to divide and secretly enter the depot and check the situation in and devour some metals. He wanted to increase the Nanites density to 10 kilos before he starts any planning. Nanites devour metal and transform the metals into their base material, which is the original material they were made of. It will be a waste to use them to transform into regular objects unless he has a large amount of them available. - KingofMortals1yrReplied to S3ntinel
The person is telling the story that happened during 2025
A sonorous voice could be heard speaking: Ancient Human calendar year 2025! - KingofMortals1yrReplied to S3ntinel
currently bit slow. am preparing for future plot and stocking chapters. so weekly 4 chapters will be released till the contract is signed then the update will be regular 7 or 8 chapters and longer word count tok.
As he laid uncomfortably inside the compartment, he closed his eyes and made Nanites divide into multiple parts and had them changed into cameras and released them throughout the plane to see the situation. He was watching through 10 visions, but it felt no problem for him as he felt like it was normal. He made the Nanites pass through the deck door and finally saw what was happening. There was a total of six people, two pilots, two attendants, and finally the two-missing people from first-class seats. - KingofMortals1yrReplied to Young_fruit_Smiley
Just started. He will develop more skills along the way
If he wanted to buy the metals, there were many problems to face. As he use them to increase Nanites, so there's no output of any products from him, which will raise suspicions in the long term. But, for now there won't be any problem except that he needs a large amount of money to buy them. Even though his family is well, he needs tens to hundreds of millions to buy the number of metals he required. Which they cant obviously provide and he won't ask them. - KingofMortals1yrReplied to Young_fruit_Smiley
everything they devour it gets copied.
He then willed the Nanites to divide and secretly enter the depot and check the situation in and devour some metals. He wanted to increase the Nanites density to 10 kilos before he starts any planning. Nanites devour metal and transform the metals into their base material, which is the original material they were made of. It will be a waste to use them to transform into regular objects unless he has a large amount of them available. - KingofMortals1yrReplied to sophia_121Ch 31 LIFE AND DEATH POWER'S OF GOD
- KingofMortals1yrReplied to Daoist502585Ch 32 DO NOT BUY THE COLA!!
- KingofMortals1yrReplied to kiddeath1998
remember they absorbed cars and mobile phones...which has cameras, dash cams and such objects.
As he laid uncomfortably inside the compartment, he closed his eyes and made Nanites divide into multiple parts and had them changed into cameras and released them throughout the plane to see the situation. He was watching through 10 visions, but it felt no problem for him as he felt like it was normal. He made the Nanites pass through the deck door and finally saw what was happening. There was a total of six people, two pilots, two attendants, and finally the two-missing people from first-class seats.