Review Detail of P41N in Factory Inc.

Poor character development, One dimension side characters, Overly OP and plot armor, Bad grammar... The author needs to think and plan on what he's going to write. Like, stop now and plan the plot on the novel. Eg. It starts on a post apocalypse world that turned a large part of the world to a wasteland and mutated beasts, then goes straight to human fleet fighting aliens without any development... I don't say to scrap it now because the idea behind the novel and the factory system are great! This is pure gold on my opinion. But it's a mess at the moment.