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Review Detail of KingofMortals in Factory Inc.

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KingofMortals
KingofMortalsLv124yrKingofMortals

First the story is awesome..... Grammar is good and the character building and world background are the most "Noticable" Best quality in this book as the author is trying exhausting his all to create a fullfilling book for us to enjoy... Let us review and vote the book so every other Dao friend can revel in enlightenment .......

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DWArden45
DWArden45Lv5DWArden45

Author deleted my review so I'll write it here. Grammar is atrocious. Stats are all over the place not making sense majority of the time (bruisers having more int than leaders/accountants/assistants). Sorry but these and others that make me drop the novel. It also has to be said the mc is an absolute IDIOT.

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King_of_Tomatoes
King_of_TomatoesLv11King_of_Tomatoes

grammer u can bear it's readable and ya ik bruises having more interesting but cmon are u dropping the novel for just a simple mistake?

3yr
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qw2
qw2Lv4qw2

guiz like u are the reason why some authors are dropping their novel, u complain a lot for ssomeone who is reading a free work.😞😞 CCant just appreciate these new authors for trying and making a masterpiece for themeselves?

DWArden45:Author deleted my review so I'll write it here. Grammar is atrocious. Stats are all over the place not making sense majority of the time (bruisers having more int than leaders/accountants/assistants). Sorry but these and others that make me drop the novel. It also has to be said the mc is an absolute IDIOT.
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