MokouFriedChicken
A reincarnation novel in first person narration. I like how the author develops the relationship between Cream and her parents. The conversation with the god is interesting. After shifting from maths to med, only to come to another world filled with magic and mathematics again. I feel as if the Mc got a chance to choose maths again, in a more interesting way. The character design is good and I don't find faults in world building. Although the progression of the story is slow paced, with a good plot, this could be a great webnovel.
Totally in love with the plot. (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦) First of all the MC telling about the Engineering and Medical fields is a real life problem but when added it to the novel it makes it more interesting. Next about the first person narration, it's damn good, my reading experience was very smooth. Now about the magic and math part I somewhat find it a matching of two different entities. But that's what makes it intresting. Good Work Author. Keep it up. Also update more. (◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)
I really like the concept of the novel! Math and magic aren’t elements that I’d expect to see, and as kind of a nerd myself haha, I love how that was portrayed. The background of the world was well written and explained. My only primary suggestion is that sometimes it spontaneously switches to present tense, and the shift distracts a little from the writing. Other than that, great work!
Greetings to the author! Where do I start? Writing the story in first person was genius actually, it was a smooth read for me. And I love how you were able to fix math (my favorite subject actually) and magic together, brilliant! The tittle is catchy as well and I love how the MC develops. Kudos and keep writing!
I've never read a reincarnation story before. But I like the dynamic between the two sides. I wish they could get along. I wonder if there is a deeper reason for why the powerful side mistreats the weaker side, but I won't know until I read more. Also lol, I like the twist that she is reincarnated on the weak side, not the strong side. 👍
This is the first time for me to read a reincarnation topic novel with non-Asian background. Also, the rebirth is not going to the past or the future but to another realm. This is interesting and a must-read novel for those who love fantasy genre. I don't know why but I kind of imagine the characters in this novel wearing clothings like those in Star Wars movies :) :) Keep up the good work, author! :)
My first five-star review! haha I really like your writing style. The words flow very smoothly. It is easy to understand and digest. I also really like Crimson's personality and inner monologue as they are consistent. I also really like how you created a unique relationship between Cream and her parents in just a couple of chapters. I also love your worldbuilding and how magic works. All in all, this is definitely a great read!
We have the same genre when it comes to magic and medieval tropes. But I must say this is fairly intriguing story. Updates are no problem whatsoever, as well as writing quality, although story development seems a little slow because from my perspective the first three chapters are important into gathering the attention of the reader. It kinda lacks the eye catching part, no offense. Character design is quite nice as your writing style directly shows how each individual move and react to one another creating a sense of emotion from them. Overall no problems, would definitely recommend so please keep writing! Hope This’ll be helpful.