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  • ForgottenLife
    ForgottenLife7mth
    Replied to IamBLANK

    I nerfed the mc? How? Mc is super weak from start.

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    ForgottenLife7mth
    Replied to pilot_armour

    This story will be last long for maybe another 300 chapters. I want to build a Narutoverse of my own around which my others Naruto fanfics will lie. Things will be more evident in future.

    Ch 313 302. Herald of Abyss
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to Drojam

    who knows since I never attended one. I hope I could attend one lol! But there are also civilians who just started the academy. So maybe! Anyway, I wasn't able to think of a valid reason.

    "Because of the heavy snowfall last night, some of the vents in the academy are blocked with ice. The classes are chilly because of this, so the principal called it a day."
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to LuigifromFBI

    thanks for the meme

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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to VermaWyrda

    Yep, he will have a love interest but it is still on back burner for now, well for atleast the third shinobi war end. Also. the serum of Mc is a growth type but some people just assume that I nerfed the fck out of it. I mean can captain America fight against a shinobi who can launch lightning, fireball, waterball and other op jutsus. Mc will get +5 attributes from serum each year. In just say 30 years he will have a surplus of +150 stats. keep in mind the stats of average civilians are at 10 and that of peak is 15. But people don't understand this. If I were to introduce sentry serum, then there will be no need for any plot. Mc will just rape Isshiki's and every Otsutsuki's ass. I have no plan of such a story. I always write a Mc with steady growth, both character wise and strength wise .My previous work is an example. Mc starts as a goofball with nothing except his powers going on for him. He knows the story but is extremely reckless and most of the times underestimate his enemies. Slowly, slowly Mc learns everything in a cruel way. This Mc will be slightly different. He will make a few mistakes here and there but he has his system to save him in such moments. Also, the start point of this Mc isn't that great compared to Izuna who was already a jounin team tier shinobi at the age of 8.

    Ch 21 21. Bullet Time
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to Len_Stoff

    The template of the attributes panel is modeled after dark souls. As for the infinite stamina from serum, super soldier serum never gives infinite stamina. It only raises a person's attributes to superhuman level. Also, do you even know what infinite stamina can even do? There are various variations of super soldier serum, the imperfect Red skull serum, the perfect Red skull serum, Arnim Zola Bucky serum, Howard stark winter Soldier serum, Bruce banner gama serum, green Goblin oz serum, Aims extremis serum, sentry serum and many more. All of them had effects and side effects. My version is not overpowered in any way. It is simply a addition of captain America version and extremis version without thr side effect of heat in which the user breaths out fire to cool his body and prevent self implosion.

    Ch 21 21. Bullet Time
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to ImAGhost

    research, my guy

    However, it features a polygon rifling barrel and is a gas-operated, semi-automatic pistol that softens the recoil. There are 7-9 bullets in the chamber. The .44 magnum is ideal for hunting and could deal a decent amount of damage to a shinobi.
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to EternalDuccMonarch

    MC's mother is still alive

    Both my son and I were left alone to fend for ourselves. So, Hokage-sama took pity on us and gave me enough funds to open a shinobi ware shop to feed ourselves."
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to doomdragoextreamgt

    I wanted to write Pew... Pew... but that felt like Mc is firing a airgun rather than a threatening weapon. So bang just for the sheer power of the weapon.

    Ch 20 20. Encounter in the Forest Part-2
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to Nihar_Suna

    Hold your horses.

    Ch 17 17. Bird of Prey
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to Worn_out_by

    no, I will continue it in November. Was burned out a little but now I have a clear plot.

    Ch 312 New Naruto Fan-fic (First Chapter is out)
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to LunarEcho

    There are various indian, chinese, latin, Greek and other cultures references in Naruto's jutsus if you look closely.

    "Fire Release: Fists of Eastern Fire God!"
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to DaoistIlY75i

    In November. I will run both fan-fics in parallel. 5 chaps for each per week.

    Ch 15 15. Sabotage of Supplies?
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    Replied to Munkhuu

    The fire in the Iron man 3 was a side-effect of the serum. The extremis serum produces too much heat in the body which the person expels as fire from his mouth to prevent himself from exploding. My version of Extremis is equivalent to Captain America's super soldier Serum, it instantly gives him peak states of a civilian not a shinobi. The bonus is, it will give him +5 stats with each passing each year of his growth. It's 100 stats in just 20 years which are a lot if you see stats of other shinobis in the following chapters in the series. So, nerfed is an understatement; it's more like I balanced it according to shinobi world.

    [Super Soldier Serum: Extremis (Perfected): - It's a growth type serum that will add +5 stats to the selected attribute of the user every passing year of life with initial addition of +5 attributes to all stats.]
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    Replied to Chronosyphon

    the stats in parentheses are for adults

    "What's the deal with this dexterity status? Why is it so high compared to my other average stats?"
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    Replied to darkcat

    hold your horses

    Ch 12 12. Inspection from Hokage
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    ForgottenLife8mth
    Replied to Uik

    or one fast pass!

    "Quest Reward: EXP * 5, gold * 50."
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    Replied to I_LOVE_MEGUMIN

    the story is not limited to firearms. There will all other sorts of weapons not just guns.

    "The shinobis might have incredible speed and reflexes, but in the end, they are made of blood and flesh. Can they outrun a gunshot? One hit to the forehead and bang… they are dead just like that."
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    ForgottenLife9mth
    Replied to akasuna123

    would you be kind enough to post a better source. It will help in future chapters

    Ch 11 Not a Chapter- Explanation of a Misconception
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    Replied to DaoOfDuck

    It's totally not me!

    ''It's an honor to see you again, Senju Clan Great Elder, I heard of your display of power, it seems I really made the right choice, hm? Well, is this boy your son? As I thought, a dragon certainly won't give birth to a dog!'' The Uzumaki Clan Leader said in an amicable tone.
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