Review Detail of lycheepearlmilktea in DEFUNCT1

I really like the concept of the novel! Math and magic aren’t elements that I’d expect to see, and as kind of a nerd myself haha, I love how that was portrayed. The background of the world was well written and explained. My only primary suggestion is that sometimes it spontaneously switches to present tense, and the shift distracts a little from the writing. Other than that, great work!