Reviews of Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

This is overall really amazing. The way you give vivid and concise descriptions is truly masterful. The story and all the characters seem to be very well written. The only complaint I have is that it seemed rather too quick. The story progressed at light speed at the next chapters, but nevertheless, Amazing work author.

You have a way with words which makes each read seem seamles, continuing from one sentence to the next and with that you've created a picture so descriptive that is so visible on each read. A great starting point , you've maintained the amusement for the reader not to get bored while reading ensuring that they continue exploring this fantasy world you've built. Overall a great book

This is my first time reading a vampire genre novel, and I found it quite interesting with a lot of suspense, but you should try to make your story a little bit simpler as I was confused at times because you did a lot of scenes at the same time in the same chapter, and now I'll tell you the biggest problem, I need more chapter.

Great story, even better characters. The world feels so alive, from the characters to the environments to the objects. If it were a game, I would call the world very lived in. And the characters are just so unique.

I'm not gonna talk about the vampire or what-not but what I wanna point out is the characters just by reading how they react to each other, to the world, and their problems. I absolutely liked the detail of the story feeling like it relentlessly pulls you back in just to read again.

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All the characters in the novel are well thought and put properly. The element of mystery the story gives in starting chapters is awesome. The way you have written can only be described is amazing

This story is something else, when I began reading it, I just couldn't stop myself... I love the Rhi character and also Dominic. oh my, what wonderful siblings they are. 🥺 I love the way they would move on with their life despite losing Tina. .. I just love everything about the story; its flow, well-constructed grammar.[img=recommend]

Its definitely the novel for those who are into vampires overall its an excellent novel not really much to pick on at least in my opninion anyway author good job keep pumping out those chapters

what I love about your book is how well their emotions are described at times I feel it's happening to me, and I also love how the story started out interestingly

I honestly love the way you write and describe. The prologue itself brought alarming sounds. The storyline also is different and new. I want more chapters author. Keep going ...Great Job🤩👌

The writing could be more polished, but it has very vivid descriptions and strong characters. Each chapter raises questions that make you want to keep reading.

This novel is splendid! The writing style is amazing, the descriptions are flawless and the story progresses smoothly. I really love the humor too. You have expressed the sibling relationship quite nicely...and accurately! You are an amazing writer. Waiting for updates.

Love the word choice, and how you put everything together. While also not using words that are too complex, and making the reader lose focus. Overall I just really like this story...

The author is able to portray a teenage girl (and the awkwardness that comes with it) to the dot. It's well written but the story simply isn't my cup of tea. Characters are well written, but there are a few times where that action and dialogs don't match, but that's my view. Read it and see for yourselves.

The beginning is superb. Actually, I really am not into female protagonist, but after reading the first chapter blindly, I like to read more. You need to update more chapter. Thanks for chapter.

This novel, I thought it was about killer. but it is not but has suspense anyway. congratulations Author! you have impressed me. have a power stone!

Overall the story and the concept is good . It was interesting to read and the further chapters should be published . The imagination was also very nice , good job author

The novel has a good start and it goes pretty good with the development of the story. The plot of the story is going pretty well so far. Although vampire isn't my cup of tea, After all, I had a good read.

You've done excellent with basically everything in the story, honestly better then me who mostly speaks caveman half the time with descriptions. Keep up the good work you have a future as an author that could probably one day get a book published if you share your work with the right people.