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T3rrence_2yrReplied to Afismushaha
Another group of people said that the views must've been bots. A way to encourage new authors to keep writing is by feeding their view count with bots. This explains why there are very few and most of the time, no comments or reviews at all. Bots can't make comments nor reviews. However, other people have explained that most readers often read without commenting or reviewing at all. You can check other users. It's not that rare to see people who view and read novels without commenting or reviewing.- T3rrence_2yrReplied to Afismus
BSJDHSHHS sorry man u gotta worship me now
A day has passed and damn, 1.14k views. I am an internet celebrity. Worship me HAHA. - T3rrence_2yrPosted
While reading a noticed a lot of issues haha. The initial idea of the story is pretty good, but it's been used before. Many times before. A business man, driven so much by work, his social life is emptier than my brain during an exam, falling in love with a lowly girl who loves to dream big, but is hindered by the pressure people, her mother, even her best friend, give her. romance + life issues + love triangle = good plot okay but we could've written it better. Maybe stretch to multiple chapters all the story we've covered so far. Without proper setup, best friend love triangles and simple life issues can be interpretted differently with different setups. How long were they best friends? or how rich exactly is our guy? does he have a picky family? what's their everyday life like? I have many questions with only surface level answers. I'm sorry if I may seem harsh haha. Another thing is plot-pacing and character building. Maybe we should've spent the first chapters introducing our characters hehe rather than jumping to the meeting. We should give very proper and vivid descriptions of our characters that when we see the name "Rose", I don't just see a name, but I see the girl and her personality and I see who she is and how she looks like. You know what I mean? Yeah, Sorry I went overboard haha. I just wanted to.. well.. make a review haha. That concludes my review :D
- T3rrence_2yrReplied to imhungryyy
BAHAHWH best gift ever.
Anyways we're at the part where I start talking random crap about writing a web novel. I may have overdone myself on the first day (by the time you're this, that was five days ago, for me only two days ago) and the second day (for you it was four days ago, for me it was yesterday), but today I didn't do much work. I did 2k words on my first day and 1.6k on my second day. Today I only did this chapter which is only eight hundred words. After overworking myself for two days, eight hundred words became so easy. To be honest, I kind of feel like writing some more. This web novel challenge thing is really fun. I really enjoy it. I hope you enjoy reading it too :D - T3rrence_2yrReplied to Nebula18457
- T3rrence_2yrReplied to erinks
- T3rrence_2yrPosted
This is overall really amazing. The way you give vivid and concise descriptions is truly masterful. The story and all the characters seem to be very well written. The only complaint I have is that it seemed rather too quick. The story progressed at light speed at the next chapters, but nevertheless, Amazing work author.
- T3rrence_2yrCommented
ah yes rhi's brother domonic yes yes
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Same paragraph twice haha. You should fix this
This paragraph has been deleted. - T3rrence_2yrReplied to imhungryyy
AAAAA TY TY UR AMAZING nice user btw <3
Anyways, I guess these views are just the fruit of my labor. I actually worked really hard on these chapters. On my first day (which is by the time this was published, it was four days ago, for me it was yesterday), I had written four separate chapters, even though only 1 of those chapters hit the eight hundred words goal, If my memory is good, I typed 2.2k words. Around that number. On the second day (which for you is 3 days ago, for me it's today) I wrote another two chapters (03 and 04 which is the chapter you are reading right now) and that totaled around 1.6k words. This web novel thing is pretty difficult and I really am happy that I got a lot of views haha. My friends even left reviews and contributed haha (totally not because I asked them to or anything). It really motivates me a lot and I'm very grateful. Thank you. - T3rrence_2yrReplied to luvkr
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