You have a way with words which makes each read seem seamles, continuing from one sentence to the next and with that you've created a picture so descriptive that is so visible on each read. A great starting point , you've maintained the amusement for the reader not to get bored while reading ensuring that they continue exploring this fantasy world you've built. Overall a great book
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