This is my first time reading a vampire genre novel, and I found it quite interesting with a lot of suspense, but you should try to make your story a little bit simpler as I was confused at times because you did a lot of scenes at the same time in the same chapter, and now I'll tell you the biggest problem, I need more chapter.
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