Good storyline!! It's interesting to read, story is moving smooth , although writing quality is also nice but needs some more improvements waiting for more updates , good job keep it up author!!

Ya l'll surely look after my writing quality

Good storyline. It's a bit messy but although interesting to read. Starting is superb but it gets down further , will need more chapters. Good job keep it up author!!

Overall the story and the concept is good . It was interesting to read and the further chapters should be published . The imagination was also very nice , good job author

The story and the concept is amazing . Overall the characters are really interesting . quality is also good , and I'll give my more time to complete all the chapters . Imagination is brilliant ,good job author

The story and the concept is really amazing. I truly loved it , and I'll give my more time to complete all the chapters , your imagination is brilliant author

Story is amazing . I truly loved the concept , overall I'll give my more time to complete all the chapters . Your imagination is brilliant author , good job .

The Story and the concept is really amazing. I truely loved it , and I'll give more time to complete all the chapters.......... Your imagination is brilliant author😍