Overall it's a good story, but it needs work, especially from a native-english proofreader. I'll revise once that happens.

repetitive...

I loved it. Thank you very much for your glorious review :D. I'm going to show it off to my friends XD.[img=update][img=recommend]

I'm glad you like my story so much. I don't know in what chapter you're at, but I promise you that the 3rd arc is amazing :D

The author is able to portray a teenage girl (and the awkwardness that comes with it) to the dot. It's well written but the story simply isn't my cup of tea. Characters are well written, but there are a few times where that action and dialogs don't match, but that's my view. Read it and see for yourselves.

Dressed in furniture? like Slighorn in HP?

This line just blew my mind. I was sure I was reading a normal fic until BOOM! have you seen Glass?

This story is so different from anything else I've seen on this site that it actually took me a while to pick up, but it is certainly worth it. It's the l¿onlook fo life of a guy with split personalities, however he is much more than just his syndrom. The characters are incredibly well developed, and the story flows almost seamlessly (I blame the system for the formatting, not the author). If you want to read something different and truly look into the soul of a person, this is the book for you.

I'll work on my descriptions for the third part :D

More than a novel, this feels like a book to make you reflect on your childhood and the ups and downs of life. It starts slow but picks up soon after. Truly a story to keep up with

Broth rights! No soup for anyone until they're given their rights!

I couldn't have said it better myself. Thank you for your review!

The thrilling adventures of a fantasy writer sent to the distant past, a past weekend Gods, spirits and chi-magic are real. What would you do in his place? I hope you'll enjoy this as much as I did writing it. [img=recommend]

Thanks a bunch! I'm working on releasing more chapters as a bulk, but for now I freed some more chapters for you to read. :D

Thanks! *pops lolipop in mouth*

The more our country will suffer from this

Eyes with shoes, that's new

How can it carry 3 wolves of it's a bit over a meter long? Two chapters before it said that it was a "meter and a few centimeters long"

You were absolutely right, it's now corrected. Thanks!

You are most welcome