Mehsimen
When the followers did not evaluate, I said I would do it myself. Because of my eye problem, I can write a part in half a day. After writing it, I translate it to English. I am correcting mistakes in translation for an hour. then I check again with the translation program. After all, I'm publishing the episode. My reward for doing all this is eye pain that I have to endure. There may be errors in the sections after what I have done, but I will not edit it further. Because I do not gain anything from this. I wrote it for fun.
Lacking and rushed. The writing quality suffer from the mediocre translation and lack of editing. The characters lack depth. Not enough interactions. The parents and grandparents are barely known. The love interest was barely part of the story, so them being together, while expected, was just dumped on us. The characters and surroundings lack descriptions. Too much focus on the level-ups of the elements, and status updates. No real training or cultivating shown. Just the results.
Low score due to not knowing what gender the MC is, also for the harem path. If there is a harem there is no plot. So far as I have read, it is confusing to say the least. there is the beginnings of a plot but it seems like it's going to just become a wish fulfillment story. No building on the characters except for the time he got slashed by a rat.
although update stability is good but throughout the chapter there will be at least 3 or 4 times author will show the status of the mc which takes half of the chapter. And there really is no development in story. He just keeps on training and becoming stronger. no introduction with original cast yet. No interaction with other characters other than his family and his 2 lovers. in short it's pretty boring
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Writing Quality: Most of it is good, but the first few chapters were kinda bad, so I think 4 stars is fair. Stability of Updates: I don't know... I binge-read my way to Chapter 31, and since then Author hasn't posted a new chapter. Story Development: The Author managed to keep the story good, and maintained an admirable attitude of writing, and didn't go crazy halfway (which I often do while writing). I think that, in itself, is admirable. Character Design: ...What can I even say... Okay, I have no words for this one other than 'Nothing is Perfect'. World Background: Well, the World itself is that of Versatile Mage, and the Author didn't stray awak from the basics of that series so it's enough for 4 stars, and again, 'Nothing is Perfect'.