please correct your he or she because they always repeat and when you mention mc you always change it to she and the chapter 3 or 4 has many mistake please change it
Mehsimen
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LIKEI don’t know if you know but grammarly is a program that can help a bit with grammar and it has a free version you can use
Mehsimen:Thank you for your warning. I fixed the errors I saw. English is not my native language. There may be mistakes.
Stewart_Jennings:I don’t know if you know but grammarly is a program that can help a bit with grammar and it has a free version you can use