Hikaye güzel Her gün güncellenirse sıralamada liderlik edebilecek bir eser Elinize sağlık Devamını bekliyorum. ...........................................................

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sistem tasarımı çok kötü! Ana sınıf seçimi çok kötü! Ana kararakter tasarımı çok kötü! Daha da kötü olanda yaptığı işlerde bir keçiden akıl alması! yazma kalitesi, güncelleme kararlılığı ve dünya arka planına olan saygım olmasaydı 1 puan bile vermezdim.

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I love reading novels, but I did not like the fiction of many novels I read. So I decided to write a novel hoping to inspire the Authors. That was my goal in the beginning, but after I started writing the novel, I found a new purpose. My New Purpose: It was to improve myself because after I started writing the novel, my thoughts and views started to develop and change. In short, my life started to change. The change in my life was reflected in the novel I wrote. The novelty in the novel you see is due to this change.

Yes it will, the episode is uncertain

I did not read the noveli either. I just watched from manga and anime. I made great use of the wiki part. But my leveling will be different. I will be posting the cultivationing levels soon.

Yes

When the followers did not evaluate, I said I would do it myself. Because of my eye problem, I can write a part in half a day. After writing it, I translate it to English. I am correcting mistakes in translation for an hour. then I check again with the translation program. After all, I'm publishing the episode. My reward for doing all this is eye pain that I have to endure. There may be errors in the sections after what I have done, but I will not edit it further. Because I do not gain anything from this. I wrote it for fun.

I don't know.Thank you for the advice.

Yorum için teşekkür ederim.Örneğini anladım.Ama göz problemim olduğundan bunu yapamam.Seriye gelince eğlence için yazıyorum.Hikayem tutulursa sevinirim.Ama tutulmazsa da yazıp hikayemi bitiririm.Değişen bir şey olmaz.Yine de önerin için teşekkür ederim.

No. I didn't add it. I will show that you understand that the system connects to the soul while MC is in training.

The MC soul is not broken. The system connects to the soul, pain occurs during this connection System An alchemy product found in the remains,

This is a translation error. This error occurs in some languages. Male Character Alex, Female Protagonist Alice, (Alice, girl)

When MC is 25 years old, he gets the system. The angle of the spirit comes from there.

Thank you for your warning. I fixed the errors I saw. English is not my native language. There may be mistakes.