Review Detail of Tonyorobsky in A STAR LEGEND ( Versatile mage Fan-fic )

Lacking and rushed. The writing quality suffer from the mediocre translation and lack of editing. The characters lack depth. Not enough interactions. The parents and grandparents are barely known. The love interest was barely part of the story, so them being together, while expected, was just dumped on us. The characters and surroundings lack descriptions. Too much focus on the level-ups of the elements, and status updates. No real training or cultivating shown. Just the results.