Tonyorobsky
I like action-adventure, sci-fi/fantasy, romance(2 choices)-ecchi stories. Big bonus if there is harem. Bonus if there is a bit of political/economical/war drama.
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??? When did Lily betray Snape and make fun of him? Snape called her a mudblood and associated with wannabe death eaters, the kind of people that wanted her enslaved or dead for no good reason.
Stun the guy in the back while they focus on Harry!
Halo CE magnum [img=recommend]
Is it flirting or joking? Don’t see flirting everywhere.
While I like HP/SG crossovers, I was never fond of magic-is-zpe, or wizards-are-altereans-descendants. HP wizardry is just too different from alterrans psyonics, and alterrans ancestry never explained the rest of the magical world (magical races, beasts and plants).
El Hazard, the magnificent world
Nope. If he was Izumi from the beginning, there is absolutly no reason for him to forget the 16y of life he lived as Izumi. The activation of the cheat would just have awakened his past life memories. You went the transmigration route, then changed your mind right on the 2nd chapter with a poor excuse. You should have modified the 1st chapter.
... *facepalm*
... haaa... why involve him instead of keeping him as an observer that is barely mentionned in the story?
Waste. Of. Time.
Waste a whole chapter of 95% canon content
1-the man started more cringe than canon Kurono despite knowing what was going to happen. 2-multiple sapient systems, with their own unwanted antics that add little to the story. A classic gamer system would have been better (even without instant dungeons). 3-the man failed to get the sword and radar early despite knowing about them. 4-the man failed to start training with his team early despite knowing that it helped canon Kuronon’s team 5-the man failed to use any team tactics for the newcomers. 6-the man neglected the newcomers, the same man who, at the very begining before transmigration, condemned that same attitude about canon Kurono. 7-forced canon events that shouldn’t have happened because he invalidated the conditions.
... That makes me want to drop the story... It’s one thing to be attracted, it’s another to mindlessly and impulsively act on said attraction. Right there, he was worse than canon Kurono, when he is expected (by the readers) to be better.
Monkey steal peach?